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Advertising can tell you a lot about a country. v.4

Advertising can tell you a lot about a country. v. 4
Advertising is the best marketing policy of selling goods all around the world. It is commonly seen that multinational companies use different ways of advertising their products to increase their sale. It is agreed that advertising tells a lot about a country. In the following paragraphs, I will explain my point of views. Firstly, most of the countries use their cultural way to advertise their goods and services. For instance, in Pakistan Junaid's Kurta house, a clothing company, advertises their dresses in a cultural way, which is called Kurta. This makes it clear that the cultural dress of Pakistan is kurta, which is usually used on several occasions. As this shows that advertising can tell and show you a lot about a country. In addition, some companies advertise imported products from different countries, which can tell you a lot about the country itself. For example, in china noodle is their national food and if look at the noodle advertisement you will see a person eating noodles with two sticks though it is really hard for other countries’ people to eat with sticks. This makes it clear that eating noodles with sticks are Chinese brand while other countries people use folks. As this shows that you can judge a country by watching their advertisements. To sum up, the above statement, advertising clothes, food, services or any other product can be easily understandable that what the people of that country commonly use. It has been proven that you can tell about a country through watching their advertisement. Thus, it is recommended that keep advertising and keep cultural aspects alive.
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goods
all around the world. It is
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seen
that multinational
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companies
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use
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different
ways of advertising their products to increase their sale. It is
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agreed
that advertising
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tells
a lot about a
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country
. In the following paragraphs, I will
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explain
my point of views.

Firstly
, most of the
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countries
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use
their
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cultural
way to advertise their
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goods
and services.
For instance
, in Pakistan
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Junaid
's
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Kurta
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house
, a clothing
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company
, advertises their dresses in a
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cultural
way, which
is called
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Kurta
. This
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makes
it
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clear
that the
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cultural
dress of Pakistan is
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kurta
, which is
usually
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used
on several occasions. As this
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shows
that advertising can
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tell
and
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show
you a lot about a country.

In addition
,
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some
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companies
advertise imported products from
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different
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countries
, which can
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tell
you a lot about the
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country
itself.
For example
, in
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china
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noodle
is their national food and if look at the
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noodle
advertisement you will
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see
a person eating
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noodles
with two sticks though it is
really
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hard
for other
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countries’
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people
to eat with sticks. This
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makes
it
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clear
that eating
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noodles
with sticks are Chinese brand while other
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countries
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people
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use
folks.
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As
this
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shows
that you can judge a
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country
by watching their advertisements.

To sum up, the above statement, advertising clothes, food, services or any other product can be
easily
understandable that what the
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people
of that
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country
commonly
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use
. It has
been proven
that you can
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tell
about a
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country
through watching their advertisement.
Thus
, it
is recommended
that
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keep
advertising and
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keep
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cultural
aspects alive.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
21Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Advertising can tell you a lot about a country. v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
267 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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