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A friend has agreed to stay in your flat (apartment) and look after it while you are away. You want to give your friend some information about the flat. Write a letter to this freind. In your letter: Give information about the flatProvide any important in v.4

A friend has agreed to stay in your flat (apartment) and look after it while you are away. You want to give your friend some information about the flat. Write a letter to this freind. In your letter: Give information about the flatProvide any important in v. 4
Hey Jery, I am writing to give you some information about the flat so your residence there will be convenient. As we planned I will leave on 23/03/2019 at 8 pm and come back on 22/04/2019. Thus, please come about half an hour before my departure so I can show you the flat. The address is the Third Floor, 23 Sherwood street. I need you to give some water to the plants every three days and also make sure that the temperature inside is about 20-degree centigrade all the time. If it falls or raises more than 2 degrees, the plants will die immediately. These are the most important things you need to remember. In case of any issue, please call Jaky, the maintenance man at 2358430 or go to his home on the first floor. He knows all most everything about the equipment in my apartment and there is a fire extinguisher at the entrance which you can use if it is needed. for any emergency contact 112. See you soon. Sorena.
Hey
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Jery
,

I am writing to give you
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some
information about the flat
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so
your residence there will be convenient. As we planned I will
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leave
on 23/03/2019 at 8 pm and
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come
back on 22/04/2019.
Thus
,
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please
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come
about half an hour
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before
my departure
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so
I can
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show
you the flat. The address is the Third Floor, 23 Sherwood street.

I need you to give
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some
water to the plants every three days and
also
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make
sure that the temperature inside is about 20-degree centigrade all the time. If it falls or raises more than 2 degrees, the plants will
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die
immediately. These are the most
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important
things you need to remember.

In case of any issue,
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please
call
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Jaky
, the maintenance
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man
at 2358430 or go to his home on the
first
floor. He knows all most everything about the equipment in my apartment and there is a fire extinguisher at the entrance which you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
if it
is needed
.
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for
any emergency contact 112.

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See
you
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soon
.

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Sorena
.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
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IELTS essay A friend has agreed to stay in your flat (apartment) and look after it while you are away. You want to give your friend some information about the flat. Write a letter to this freind. In your letter: Give information about the flatProvide any important in v. 4

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
173 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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