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A few days ago, you went shopping at a local grocery store. When you got home and looked at your bill, you found that you had been charged for items you did not purchase. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter, •explain what happened•expres v.1

A few days ago, you went shopping at a local grocery store. When you got home and looked at your bill, you found that you had been charged for items you did not purchase. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter, •explain what happened•expres v. 1
Youngsters in their teens today, are becoming a source for a lot of social issues. There are a great majority of people who have an opinion that this is because parents do not spend much time to look after their offsprings. This essay will discuss why I agree with the aforementioned. In today's burgeoning competition, people thrive to be successful in their respective fields. For that, they work a lot harder and often miss out on spending a good amount of time with their children and family. To illustrate, with IT industry expanding with the current pace, an individual is wilful to break the norms and work overtime to go hand in hand with other people in the same profession thus remaining aloof from the family time, particularly their young ones. These are some of the facts which explain the increasing differences between the parents and their adolescents. In addition, modern day youngsters are also somewhat guilty of not devoting much time to their kin. They prefer giving most of their time to their pals thus leaving their parents longing for their love. To support this fact, in the USA, it has been found in a survey, that about 40% of the people in their teenage like spending much of their free time with their friends as they find a great sense of leeway there. It is for these reasons why today, parents and their children are not able to spend much of the time together. To sum things up, teenagers today give rise to a lot of problems for the community. This essay discussed why I agree that parents should spend much more time with their family than what they are doing at present.
Youngsters in their teens
today
, are becoming a source for
a lot of
social issues. There are a great
majority
of
people
who have an opinion that this is
because
parents
do not spend
much
time
to look after their
offsprings
. This essay will discuss why I
agree
with the aforementioned.

In
today
's burgeoning competition,
people
thrive to be successful in their respective fields. For that, they work a lot harder and
often
miss out on spending a
good
amount of
time
with their children and family. To illustrate, with IT industry expanding with the
current
pace, an individual is
wilful
to break the norms and work overtime to go hand in hand with other
people
in the same profession
thus
remaining aloof from the family
time
,
particularly
their young ones. These are
some of the
facts which
explain
the increasing differences between the
parents
and their adolescents.

In addition
, modern day youngsters are
also
somewhat guilty of not devoting
much
time
to their kin. They prefer giving most of their
time
to their pals
thus
leaving their
parents
longing for their
love
. To support this fact, in the USA, it has
been found
in a survey, that about 40% of the
people
in their teenage like spending
much
of their free
time
with their friends as they find a great sense of leeway there. It is for these reasons why
today
,
parents
and their children are not able to spend
much
of the
time
together.

To sum things up,
teenagers
today
give rise to
a lot of
problems for the community. This essay discussed why I
agree
that
parents
should spend
much
more
time
with their family than what they are doing at present.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay A few days ago, you went shopping at a local grocery store. When you got home and looked at your bill, you found that you had been charged for items you did not purchase. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter, •explain what happened•expres v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
285 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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