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8. Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people with a better education. Agree or disagree. v.1

8. Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people with a better education. Agree or disagree. v. 1
Such is the citizens' ignorance about garbage, and such is irresponsible behaviour of them, who argues that debris is not sufficient to be used for recycling, whereas, this is all over the place, creating untidiness, as a result of this common diseases are now inevitable and animals are dying. Therefore, I completely agree with the opinion, the authorities should introduce some policies to enforce recycling and avoid the consequences of rubbish on the environment. The key reason why I consider recycling should be enforced by the authorities is because scattered trash creates an unhealthy atmosphere and causes ill health. To illustrate, wet and dry garbage is thrown out everywhere due to that flies and harmful bacteria’s are grown, these flies sit on our food and harmful bacteria’s are the main root for common sickness. The government needs to make some policy to create awareness on recycling and should provide required education in schools, colleges and institutions. Strict rules will make sure to put it in practice by sending notices to commercials as well as housing societies to offer changes in citizens habit. Another reason why I believe the notion that animals and birds are consuming plastic from carelessly thrown waste is taking their lives. Authorities should start penalizing every society, those who are not following recycling rules and contributing to killing innocent animals and birds. This should be shared by all kinds of media to learn from mistakes. In conclusion, I completely agree to increase recycling and to reduce trash; the authorities should introduce some policies. This will avoid consequences caused by debris on the environment and certainly will motivate people to take a positive step to reduce, recycle, reuse and deploy trash properly.
Such is the citizens' ignorance about garbage, and such is irresponsible
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behaviour
of them, who argues that debris is not sufficient to be
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used
for
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recycling
, whereas, this is all over the place, creating untidiness,
as a result
of this common diseases are
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now
inevitable and animals are dying.
Therefore
, I completely
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agree
with the opinion, the
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authorities
should introduce
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some
policies to enforce
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
and avoid the consequences of rubbish on the environment.

The key reason why I consider
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recycling
should
be enforced
by the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
authorities
is
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because
scattered trash creates an unhealthy atmosphere and causes ill health. To illustrate, wet and dry garbage
is thrown
out everywhere due to that flies and harmful bacteria’s
are grown
, these flies sit on our food and harmful bacteria’s are the main root for common sickness. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
needs to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
policy to create awareness on
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recycling
and should provide required education in schools, colleges and institutions. Strict
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure to put it in practice by sending notices to commercials
as well
as housing societies to offer
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changes
in citizens habit.

Another reason why I believe the notion that animals and birds are consuming plastic from
carelessly
thrown waste is taking their
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lives
.
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Authorities
should
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start
penalizing every society, those who are not following
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
and contributing to killing innocent animals and birds. This should
be shared
by all kinds of media to learn from mistakes.

In conclusion
, I completely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
to increase
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
and to
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reduce
trash; the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
authorities
should introduce
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
policies. This will avoid consequences caused by debris on the environment and
certainly
will motivate
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
to take a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
step to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
, recycle, reuse and deploy trash
properly
.
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IELTS essay 8. Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people with a better education. Agree or disagree. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
284 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 7.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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