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8. You need to travel from your home to a place 40 miles (64 kilometers) away. Compare the different kinds of transportation you could use. Tell which method of travel you would choose. Give specific reasons for your choice. v.2

8. You need to travel from your home to a place 40 miles (64 kilometers) away. Compare the different kinds of transportation you could use. Tell which method of travel you would choose. Give specific reasons for your choice. v. 2
Transportation has always been one of the biggest concerns for humankind. There is a variety of ways to move around between cities and other places. Depends on your city and your situation it is different. In some big cities such as New York, there is lots of ways for going to another spot. In some small towns such as Centerton or Bentonville, there is a few ways to move around. If I were in this situation for choosing a way for move between two spot, I would choose my self-car. There is other ways such as Uber, group using and etc. Each way has some advantages and some disadvantages. I prefer to choose my own car. First of all, the most access able way is self-car. Every one prefer to use his/her own car, because of some reasons. One of them is, being ready all the time, each second and each day in a week. The second one is about, being economy. This was the economiest way for travel between two spots. The third reason is about safety. If a person has enough expert to ride a car, he/she would be confidence about his/her trip. He/she knows himself/herself and he/she can trust the driver! On the other hand, this way has some disadvantages too. Some people has not a good or comfortable car. Some of them are not a good driver and etc. Second of all, the newest way for travel between to cities is using Uber. Some people prefer to just sit in the car and be relax. No driving, no stress and no driver license needed. They want to pay more, but being free of driving. They will use Uber app and order a car. They will get a nearest car in the closest time. As I mentioned that, this way has some disadvantages too, such as paying more or some safety issues, because the passengers don' t know about driver. Is he/she a good driver or a bad one? Is his/her car a safe vehicle or not? So this way is not good for some people too. Finally, the last available way in our city is renting a car. Everybody with a valid driver license can pay for a car and rent it for a determined period time. They can choose their car model or so and they should drive all the way. As a matter of fact, this way has some disadvantages too, such as being bored of driving or doesn' t have a driver license and pay a bigger amount compare with their own car. One of my friends in the California rented a car for a week to show her wife around the state. After two days they called me and ask me to find a way to get out of that situation. Their car had a mechanical problem and they were totally unfamiliar with those kind of thing. Also they didn' t know that how they can fix it or where they should call. They asked me to help them. After soling that problem, they decided to cancel the whole trip. They were in the lots of stress during that journey. To sum up, there is lots of ways to choose for travel between two spot, but the easiest and the best way is different for everybody. It depends on everybody' s situation.
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ways
to
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move
around between
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cities
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it is
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different
. In
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some
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big
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cities
such as New York, there is lots of
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ways
for going to another
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spot
. In
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small
towns such as
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Centerton
or Bentonville, there is a few
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ways
to
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move
around. If I were in this
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for
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move
between two
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spot
, I would
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choose
my self-car. There is other
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ways
such as Uber, group using
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. Each
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way
has
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some
advantages and
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disadvantages. I prefer to
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my
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own
car.

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, the most access able
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way
is self-car. Every one prefer to
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use
his/her
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own
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car
,
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some
reasons. One of them is, being ready all the time, each second and each day in a week. The second one is about, being economy. This was the
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economiest
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way
for travel between two
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spots
. The third reason is about safety. If a person has
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enough
expert to ride a
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car
,
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he/she
would be confidence about his/her trip.
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knows himself/
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herself and
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he/she
can trust the
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driver
!
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, this
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way
has
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some
disadvantages too.
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people
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has
not a
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good
or comfortable
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car
.
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Some
of them are not a
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good
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driver
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and etc
.

Second of all, the newest
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way
for travel between to
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cities
is using Uber.
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people
prefer to
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just
sit in the
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car
and be
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relax
. No driving, no
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stress
and no
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driver
license needed. They want to pay more,
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but
being free of driving. They will
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use
Uber app and order a
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car
.
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They
will
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get
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a
nearest
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car
in the closest time. As I mentioned that, this
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way
has
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some
disadvantages too, such as paying more or
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some
safety issues,
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because
the passengers
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driver
. Is
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he/she
a
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good
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driver
or a
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one? Is his/her
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car
a safe vehicle or not?
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this
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way
is not
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for
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some
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people
too.

Finally
, the last available
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way
in our city is renting a
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car
. Everybody with a valid
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driver
license can pay for a
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car
and rent it for a determined period time. They can
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choose
their
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car
model or
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so and
they should drive all the
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way
. As a matter of fact, this
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has
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disadvantages too, such as being
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driving or
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doesn&
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driver
license and pay a bigger amount compare with their
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own
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car
. One of my friends in the California rented a
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car
for a week to
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show
her wife around the state. After two days they called me and ask me to find a
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way
to
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get
out of that
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. Their
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had a mechanical
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problem and
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totally
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it or where they should call. They asked me to
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them. After soling that problem, they decided to cancel the whole trip. They were in the lots of
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stress
during that journey.

To sum up, there is lots of
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ways
to
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choose
for travel between two
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spot
,
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but
the easiest and the best
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is
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for everybody. It depends on
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.
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61Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20Mistakes

IELTS essay 8. You need to travel from your home to a place 40 miles (64 kilometers) away. Compare the different kinds of transportation you could use. Tell which method of travel you would choose. Give specific reasons for your choice. v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
560 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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