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75. Some believe that the students should take a one-year break beforeattending college. Do you agree or disagree with the opinion and why? v.1

75. Some believe that the students should take a one-year break beforeattending college. with the opinion and why? v. 1
It is indeed true that multifarious of urban nations are suffering from overpopulation. With regards to populace individuals face numerous hassles in their life, namely unemployment, poverty stricken and so forth. A myriad of problems and solution are created by overcrowded. I will discuss difficulties as well as solutions in upcoming fragments with rational conclusion. Ironically enough, in most countries of the world the community is increasing alarmingly, it has various cause, first and foremost, multiple of folks do not get enough food. Owing to overcrowded, they have no sufficient land to grow crops. Beside this the second reason of people is training in limit, through this the unemployment also increasing every day, additionally, several of crimes also committed by unemployment masses because they do not full fill their fundamental requirements. It means that, if people are well educated then they also control also control of the state. Every problem has seed of solutions, society can be controlled by study, awareness as well as full information, in detail, if any, women who pregnant and they want an abortion then the government should allow illegally it. Apart from it, the government should provide free schooling for people, so every person can afford learning on time as well as they get proper information related everything which helps them to decrease overcrowd. Thus, it can be inferred that, culture is a serious obstacle in many nations, it can be resolved by literacy and awareness, it is also a responsibility also responsibility of government, they should provide facilities to their nation masses.
It is
indeed
true that multifarious of urban nations are suffering from overpopulation.
With regards to
populace individuals face numerous hassles in their life,
namely
unemployment,
poverty stricken
and
so
forth. A myriad of problems and solution
are created
by overcrowded. I will discuss difficulties as
well
as solutions in upcoming fragments with rational conclusion.

Ironically
enough
, in most countries of the world the community is increasing
alarmingly
, it has various cause,
first
and foremost, multiple of folks do not
get
enough
food. Owing to overcrowded, they have no sufficient land to grow crops. Beside this the second reason of
people
is training in limit, through this the unemployment
also
increasing every day,
additionally
, several of crimes
also
committed by unemployment masses
because
they do not full fill their fundamental requirements. It means that, if
people
are
well educated
then they
also
control
also
control of the state.

Every problem has seed of solutions, society can
be controlled
by study, awareness as
well
as full information, in detail, if any, women who
pregnant and
they want an abortion then the
government
should
allow
illegally
it. Apart from it, the
government
should provide free schooling for
people
,
so
every person can afford
learning
on time as
well
as they
get
proper information related everything which
helps
them to decrease overcrowd.

Thus
, it can
be inferred
that, culture is a serious obstacle in
many
nations, it can
be resolved
by literacy and awareness, it is
also
a responsibility
also
responsibility of
government
, they should provide facilities to their nation masses.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay 75. Some believe that the students should take a one-year break beforeattending college. with the opinion and why? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
258 words
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