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498 describe a person who has done a lot of work to help people. you should saywho this person is/waswhere this person lives/livedwhat he has done to help peopleand explain how you know about this person v.1

498 describe a person who has done a lot of work to help people. you should saywho this person is/waswhere this person lives/livedwhat he has done to help peopleand explain how you know about this person v. 1
Possession of cars for individuals has been increasing drastically over the past of couple of decades in the major developing countries and apparently, it leads to one of the predominant unsolvable issue for the governments today. I completely agree with the aforementioned statement. There are various precautions for the central and state government authorities in order to avoid usage of cars daily routine works. Firstly, by increasing the fuel and its subsequent materials such as crude oil as well as diesel prices. By this way, governments can control certain level of utilization of cars. Secondly, the owners of the cars must follow the rules and pollution regulations governed by the system. For instance, frequent pollution checking of their vehicles at least for every or twice in a month cars need to proceed for service stations, where we have more possibilities to find the problems of vehicles. And also, all the Road Transport Authorities must come up with a certain age limit for the vehicles and beyond the specific period, all vehicles need to consider special areas where it required more innovations. On the other hand, alternatively, governments need to bring new initiatives such as pollution free electric cars, so that, public eventually adopted towards the new era of sophisticated eco-friendly environments. However, irrespective of governments encouraging new engineering thoughts or methodologies, public need to use public transport more and more. In order to facilitate people, government bodies need to think about more fascinating offers to attract common people who cannot afford to purchase their own vehicles. Even general public also has responsibility to contemplate the issue of traffic jam. Alternative to the public transport vehicles such as buses, metro trains, subway trains. Governments and public need to involve in the advantages of using bicycles. To conclude, Even though government authorities controlling with a plethora of sections and acts or bills to avoid and to discourage public not to use or buy their own vehicles, it's also responsible to follow the rules and regulations passed by RTI for the public.
Possession of
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cars
for individuals has been increasing
drastically
over the past of couple of decades in the major
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developing countries
and
apparently
, it leads to one of the predominant unsolvable issue for the
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governments
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today
. I completely
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agree
with the aforementioned statement.

There are various precautions for the central and state
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government
authorities in order to avoid usage of
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cars
daily routine works.
Firstly
, by increasing the fuel and its subsequent materials such as crude oil
as well
as diesel prices. By this way,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
governments
can control certain level of utilization of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cars
.
Secondly
, the owners of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cars
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must
follow the
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rules
and pollution regulations governed by the system.
For instance
, frequent pollution checking of their
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vehicles
at least for every or twice in a month
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cars
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need
to proceed for service stations, where we have more possibilities to find the problems of
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vehicles
. And
also
, all the Road Transport Authorities
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must
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come
up with a certain age limit for the
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vehicles
and beyond the specific period, all
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vehicles
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need
to consider special areas where it required more innovations.

On the other hand
,
alternatively
,
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governments
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need
to bring new initiatives such as pollution free electric
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cars
,
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so
that,
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public
eventually
adopted towards the new era of sophisticated eco-friendly environments.
However
, irrespective of
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governments
encouraging new engineering thoughts or methodologies,
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public
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need
to
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use
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public
transport more and more. In order to facilitate
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people
,
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government
bodies
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need
to
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think
about more fascinating offers to attract common
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people
who cannot afford to
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purchase
their
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own
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vehicles
. Even general
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public
also
has responsibility to contemplate the issue of traffic jam. Alternative to the
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public
transport
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vehicles
such as buses, metro trains, subway trains.
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Governments
and
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public
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need
to involve in the advantages of using bicycles.

To conclude
,
Even though
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government
authorities controlling with a plethora of sections and acts or bills to avoid and to discourage
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public
not to
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use
or
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
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vehicles
, it's
also
responsible to follow the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
and regulations passed by RTI for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay 498 describe a person who has done a lot of work to help people. you should saywho this person is/waswhere this person lives/livedwhat he has done to help peopleand explain how you know about this person v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
339 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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