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49 What kind of qualities should a good leader possess Please state your opinion and give specific details and examples in your explanation v.1

49 What kind of qualities should a good leader possess Please state your opinion and give specific details and examples in your explanation v. 1
Learning languages is a long term process required lots of practise. While some believe that the only way to achieve a proficient level in the English language is with a native English speaking teacher, I personally reckon that in some cases it does not matter on the first stages either a teacher a native English speaker or not. On the contrary, what is the matter is the level of knowledge of a teacher. First of all, taking into consideration that there is a numerous of working methods and methodology of English teaching, modern teachers are most of time are required to strictly follow it starting from elementary level till intermediate one. In other words, it is not necessary to have a native speaker to teach one basics as it can do any other teacher who knows methodology well and how to teach others. Secondly, a success in the English language studying lays in a repetitive practise in such activities as writing, speaking, listening and reading. Moreover, in the century of technological advancements there are a variety of opportunities to communicate with people from different countries, including English speaking ones and talking to foreigners brings the same effect as speaking with native teacher. Thus, native teacher is considered to be not the most important part of the goal achievement in English learning. To cite this I have been learning English since I was five years old and only recently I got the chance to study English with a native speaker teacher. Hence, I do not think that if I studied with a native speaker from the beginning my English would sound more natural. To conclude, as many bilingual people say having a motivation one can learn any language, even on their own that is why whether you will be taught by a native English speaker or not does not matter.
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languages
is a long term process required lots of
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practise
. While
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some
believe that the
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only
way to achieve a proficient level in the English
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language
is with a
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native
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English speaking
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teacher
, I
personally
reckon that in
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some
cases it does not matter on the
first
stages either a
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teacher
a
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native
English speaker or not.
On the contrary
, what is the matter is the level of knowledge of a teacher.

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First of all
, taking into consideration that there is
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a numerous of
working methods and methodology of English teaching, modern
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teachers
are
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most of time
are required
to
strictly
follow it starting from elementary level till intermediate one.
In other words
, it is not necessary to have a
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native
speaker to teach one basics as it can do any other
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teacher
who knows methodology well and how to teach others.

Secondly
, a success in the English
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language
studying lays in a repetitive
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practise
in such activities as writing, speaking, listening and reading.
Moreover
, in the century of technological advancements there are a variety of opportunities to communicate with
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people
from
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different
countries, including
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English speaking
ones and talking to foreigners brings the same effect as speaking with
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native
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teacher
.
Thus
,
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native
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teacher
is considered
to be not the most
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important
part of the goal achievement in English learning. To cite this I have been learning English since I was five years
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old
and
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only
recently I
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got
the chance to study English with a
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native
speaker
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teacher
.
Hence
, I do not
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think
that if I studied with a
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native
speaker from the beginning my English would sound more natural.

To conclude
, as
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many
bilingual
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people
say having a motivation one can learn any
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language
, even on their
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own
that is
why whether you will
be taught
by a
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native
English speaker or
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not does not
matter.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
The joy of knowing a foreign language is inexpressible. I find it really difficult to express such joy in my mother tongue.
Munia Khan

IELTS essay 49 What kind of qualities should a good leader possess Please state your opinion and give specific details and examples in your explanation v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
309 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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