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In today’s very competitive world, a worker has to possess multiple skills to succeed. Among the skills that a worker should possess, which skill do you think is more important, social skills or good qualifications? Explain the reasons and provide specific examples to support your answer. v.3

In today’s very competitive world, a worker has to possess multiple skills to succeed. Among the skills that a worker should possess, which skill do you think is more important, social skills or good qualifications? Explain the reasons and provide specific examples to support your answer. v. 3
Nowadays, working people need to have a lot of skills beyond good qualifications other skills such as management skills, soft skills. . . I think qualification skills and social skills are indispensable in this current age. Because it determines whether you can do it or not. This essay will discuss both points of view before coming to a reasoned conclusion. First, we need to understand social skills is what we interact with or contact with others. And in the social skills of work is one of the most important factors, we should listen and respond kindly to the task to be smooth. Social skills, build the necessary personality traits such as trustworthiness, respect, responsibility, fairness and this creates strong teamwork. For example: In the environmental work, if we could connect with most people, and when we face difficulties, There will always be colleagues who are ready to help. However, besides social skills, qualification skills are also really necessary. Professional skills are what we are taught and through practical performances that will determine our career path later. In addition, during work, we can learn and supplement other skills. Life is growing day by day, requiring people to have in0depth knowledge, so everyone needs to constantly train and learn to improve themselves and have a better promotion at work. For instance: we sometimes get stuff, we can ask people for help, but if we don't have a good accomplishment, then our career will be still in place or we will be eliminated sooner. In summary, whatever qualification or social skills are all important in the process of our professional activities. To complete the job well, we have to practice and promote these two factors to increase our values.
Nowadays, working
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skills
beyond
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good
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qualifications
other
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skills
such as management
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skills
, soft
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skills
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think
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qualification
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skills
and
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social
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skills
are indispensable in this
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current
age.
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Because
it determines whether you can do it or not. This essay will discuss both points of view
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before
coming to a reasoned conclusion.

First
, we need to understand
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social
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skills
is what we interact with or contact with others. And in the
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social
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skills
of
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work
is one of the most
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important
factors, we should listen and respond kindly to the task to be smooth.
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Social
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skills
, build the necessary personality traits such as trustworthiness, respect, responsibility, fairness and this creates strong teamwork.
For example
: In the environmental
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work
, if we could connect with most
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people
, and when we face difficulties, There will always be colleagues who are ready to
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help
.

However
,
besides
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social
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skills
,
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qualification
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skills
are
also
really
necessary. Professional
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skills
are what we
are taught
and through practical performances that will determine our career path later.
In addition
, during
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work
, we can learn and supplement other
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skills
. Life is growing day by day, requiring
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people
to have in0depth knowledge,
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so
everyone needs to
constantly
train and learn to
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improve
themselves and have a better promotion at
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work
.
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: we
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sometimes
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stuff, we can ask
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people
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help
,
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if we don't have a
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accomplishment, then our career will be
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place or
we will
be eliminated
sooner.

In summary, whatever
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qualification
or
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social
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skills
are all
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important
in the process of our professional activities. To complete the job well, we
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have to
practice and promote these two factors to increase our values.
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IELTS essay In today’s very competitive world, a worker has to possess multiple skills to succeed. Among the skills that a worker should possess, which skill do you think is more important, social skills or good qualifications? Explain the reasons and provide specific examples to support your answer. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
286 words
9
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 9.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 9.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 9.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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