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30. Some people thinks that government should tax unhealthy food to encourage people to begin to eat more healthy meals. Do you agree or disagree. v.1

In recent time, the number of people belive that fast food affect the health of Human being. it is therefore suggested that higher rate on junkfood because Discourage people and I belive that government should impose on tax will health Of the people be good. Firstly imposing a higher tax can reduce a high risk of health, It is going to Motivate masses to consume food which is nutritious and beneficial to health. Also affected that needy people who eat fast food more than home food. For Instance some restaurants conduct extra money to their price menu and also Government imposed the highest tax on food like 12% to 18% which reduce their Selling on fast food around 20% additionally will make unaffordable to poor People and middleclass family that's why people consider junk food expensive as A result so people will not think of eating junk food. Moreover, putting more tax on fast food will increase the governmen’s Income so administratation should be revenue to be used to help the poor p People or in hospitals where people can cure their disease with less money In some country approves free treatment of people from recognized country Tax saving although many may argue that fast food is a necessity for those Who have not time for making a food and they can not spend more money To purchase fast food. However I feel that the government should give The tax money to the health department from food tax. In conclusion taxes on unhelthy foods will bring good income to the Government and people will be less unwell therefore, I fully agree that Government should impose giant tax on ready made food.
In recent time, the number of
people
belive
that
fast
food
affect the health of

Human being.
it
is
therefore
suggested that higher rate on
junkfood
because


Discourage
people
and
I belive
that
government
should impose on
tax
will health

Of the
people
be
good
.

Firstly
imposing a higher
tax
can
reduce
a high
risk
of health, It is going to

Motivate masses to consume
food
which is nutritious and beneficial to health.

Also
affected
that needy
people
who eat
fast
food
more than home
food
. For

Instance
some
restaurants conduct extra money to their price menu and
also


Government
imposed the highest
tax
on
food
like 12% to 18% which
reduce
their

Selling on
fast
food
around 20%
additionally
will
make
unaffordable to poor

People
and
middleclass
family that's why
people
consider junk
food
expensive as

A result
so
people
will not
think
of eating junk food.

Moreover
, putting more
tax
on
fast
food
will increase the
governmen
’s

Income
so
administratation
should be revenue to be
used
to
help
the poor p

People
or in hospitals where
people
can cure their disease with less money

In
some
country approves free treatment of
people
from recognized country

Tax saving although
many
may argue that
fast
food
is a necessity for those

Who have not time for making a
food and
they can not spend more money

To
purchase
fast
food
.
However
I feel that the
government
should
give


The
tax
money to the health department from
food
tax.

In conclusion
taxes
on
unhelthy
foods
will bring
good
income to the

Government
and
people
will be less unwell
therefore
, I
fully
agree
that

Government
should impose giant
tax
on
ready made
food
.
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IELTS essay Somepeople think that the government should put a tax on unhelthy food To Encourage. People to eat more healthy.

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