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18/09/2017You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter. Describe the situationExplain why you cannot continue at this timeSay what v.1

18/09/2017You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter. Describe the situationExplain why you cannot continue at this timeSay what v. 1
It is a common belief among the psychologists the colour can change the people's mood. Therefore, some places colour change should be utilized suitable for the people's needs. In this essay, ı will briefly elaborated it in terms of some scientific data, cultural and superstitions. In the modern life, many managers or some authorities ask for to the psychologists to rise up people's emotional mood. Thus, they figure colour effects out to support people's productivity, even also health. For instance, the pastel colours such as blue, green, purple are used mostly in the hospitals in order to stay relaxed. In addition, many of the company has painted the office wall with these types of natural colour. That is to say, if the individual keep being comfortable, and happy, everything would be better than reality. Actually, it should be some placebo effect on the human brain, according to the psychologists, admittedly there was a great influence should be given as heritage for the next generations. On the other hand, some cultural belief or superstition adjusts the people's mind. All around the world, neither social scientists, nor medical doctors can have not eliminated its effects. For example, in some Eastern countries, the people believe the black colour gets happiness, however in the West, the same colour is considerable for bad luck. For the thousand years, these kind of things should have not replaced by the scientific reality based on real case or data. In conclusion, I restate that there was an undeniable influence of the colours to being happy, sad, angry, relax, tolerant, productive or reluctant. However, all these emotions can be just a reflection of the placebo and cultural things. In the last words, these effects are linked to individual psychology, sometimes so far health or joy, sometimes so close.
It is a common belief among the psychologists the
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colour
can
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change
the
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people's
mood.
Therefore
,
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some
places
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colour
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change
should
be utilized
suitable for the
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people's
needs. In this essay, ı will
briefly
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elaborated
it in terms of
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some
scientific data, cultural and superstitions.

In the modern life,
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many
managers or
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some
authorities
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ask for
to the psychologists to rise up
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people's
emotional mood.
Thus
, they figure
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colour
effects out to support
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people's
productivity, even
also
health.
For instance
, the pastel
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colours
such as blue, green, purple are
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used
mostly
in the hospitals in order to stay relaxed.
In addition
,
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many
of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
has painted the office wall with these types of natural
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colour
.
That is
to say, if the individual
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
being comfortable, and happy, everything would be better than reality. Actually, it should be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
placebo
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effect
on the human brain, according to the psychologists,
admittedly
there was a great influence should be
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given
as heritage for the
next
generations.

On the other hand
,
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some
cultural belief or superstition adjusts the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people's
mind. All around the world, neither social scientists, nor medical doctors can have not eliminated its effects.
For example
, in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
Eastern countries, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
believe the black
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colour
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gets
happiness,
however
in the West, the same
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colour
is considerable for
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bad
luck. For the thousand years,
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these kind
of things should have not replaced by the scientific reality based on real case or data.

In conclusion
, I restate that there was an undeniable influence of the
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colours
to being happy, sad, angry, relax, tolerant, productive or reluctant.
However
, all these emotions can be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
a reflection of the placebo and cultural things. In the last words, these effects
are linked
to individual psychology,
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sometimes
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so
far health or joy,
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sometimes
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so
close.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay 18/09/2017You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter. Describe the situationExplain why you cannot continue at this timeSay what v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
299 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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