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107. What is the most important consideration for you when choosing your vacation destination? Why? Use examples and reasons to support your response. v.1

107. What is the most important consideration for you when choosing your vacation destination? Why? Use examples and reasons to support your response. v. 1
From the past decade, No one has come to a conclusion that how an idealized community be, which is a common dream for each and every individual. This essay will discuss the most two important elements to make a perfect society by good manners and friendly behaviour of each and everyone individual in this modern world and This essay also explains how can people achieve an ideal society including good habits and moral values. I think there are some significant factors that lead to the perfection of society, and people need to act to build an ideal society. The main important thing to build a flawless environment is to posses well-disposed and be well as that can help the common people to lead their happy and peaceful. By this, every individual can help each other and maintain the family relationship which is most essential element of having a flawless association. For example, a survey conducted by Deccan chronicle newspaper stated that a particular set of people living in japan is peaceful and happy by following good behaviour and friendly nature. Furthermore, these constitute to set an example for the rest of them in the country. This can be achieved by including the good habits and moral values of the people from the childhood. Though this, everyone tends to behave in a good manner and cooperate among themselves, which help to form a better community. For instance, the particular locality in an area come together and started a club and started to socialize each other, as a result, they are very much self sufficient and joyful. Apart from this, this will also be helpful flamming development activities in their locality. In conclusion, in today’s modern world more and more people are dreaming of a perfect world. Here article discussed the two important elements to form a perfect environment such as good manners and friendly behaviour. And Here article also discussed how to achieve the ideal society by good habits and moral values. I believe that an ideal society can be gained if both governments and individuals put much their effort together in creating a greater life.
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individual
. This essay will discuss the most two
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important
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society
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good
manners and friendly
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behaviour
of each and
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everyone
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individual
in this modern world and This essay
also
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explains
how can
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people
achieve an
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ideal
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society
including
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good
habits and moral values. I
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think
there are
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some
significant factors that lead to the perfection of
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society
, and
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people
need to act to build an
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ideal
society.

The main
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important
thing to build a flawless environment is to posses well-disposed and be well as that can
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help
the common
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people
to lead their happy and peaceful. By this, every
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individual
can
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help
each other and maintain the family relationship which is
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most
essential element of having a flawless association.
For example
, a survey conducted by Deccan chronicle newspaper stated that a particular set of
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people
living in japan is peaceful and happy by following
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good
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behaviour
and friendly nature.
Furthermore
, these constitute to set an example for the rest of them in the country.

This can
be achieved
by including the
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good
habits and moral values of the
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people
from the childhood. Though this, everyone tends to behave in a
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good
manner and cooperate among themselves, which
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help
to form a better community.
For instance
, the particular locality in an area
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come
together and
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started
a club and
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started
to socialize each other,
as a result
, they are
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much
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self sufficient
and joyful. Apart from this, this will
also
be helpful
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flamming
development activities in their locality.

In conclusion
, in
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today
’s modern world more and more
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people
are dreaming of a perfect world. Here article discussed the two
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important
elements to form a perfect environment such as
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good
manners and friendly
Possible spelling mistake. 'behaviour' is British English.
behaviour
. And Here article
also
discussed how to achieve the
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ideal
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society
by
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good
habits and moral values. I believe that an
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ideal
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society
can
be gained
if both
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governments
and
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individuals
put much their effort together in creating a greater life.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay 107. What is the most important consideration for you when choosing your vacation destination? Why? Use examples and reasons to support your response. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
355 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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