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Word framing is a person's way of describing a situation. The professor takes two examples to illustrate "word framing". Explain how the examples are related to the reading passage. v.2

Word framing is a person's way of describing a situation. The professor takes two examples to illustrate "word framing". Explain how the examples are related to the reading passage. v. 2
We often heard that people like to wear fashionable clothes. Nowadays, you just need a mobile phone with internet to look what is trending up in the world today. While it is completely true that the fashion industry has a big influence on the way we dress, people like to be fashionable for other reasons as well. In this essay, I will give a possible explanation and discuss whether wearing fashionable clothes can be positive or negative. It is often claimed that people wear fashionable clothes because they love to be elegant, However, I would not describe it as the most plausible explanation. Currently, how we look is more important than how we really are. From this perspective, people often buy the latest design to fit into society. Therefore, if you wear trendy stuff, you will likely become popular and thus, you will perform better in your social life. From my point of view, wearing fashionable clothes is not per se a bad thing, but it can become in negative if you start to be obsessive about that. As I see it, people should avoid any mania about being trendy and just getting used to wearing the stuff you like no matter whether it is popular or not. To sum up, fitting into modern society would explain why people like to wear fashionable clothes such as suits, hats or shirts. To be honest, I believe that being fashionable can become a problem if people start to be obsessive about the stuff they wear rather than focus on the way they are.
We
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often
heard that
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people
like to
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wear
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fashionable
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clothes
. Nowadays, you
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just
need a mobile phone with internet to look what is trending up in the world
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today
. While it is completely true that the fashion industry has a
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big
influence on the way we dress,
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people
like to be
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fashionable
for other reasons
as well
. In this essay, I will give a possible explanation and discuss whether wearing
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fashionable
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clothes
can be
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positive
or
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negative
.

It is
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often
claimed that
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people
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wear
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fashionable
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clothes
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because
they
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love
to be elegant,
However
, I would not
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describe
it as the most plausible explanation.
Currently
, how we look is more
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important
than how we
really
are. From this perspective,
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people
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often
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buy
the latest design to fit into society.
Therefore
, if you
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wear
trendy stuff, you will likely become popular and
thus
, you will perform better in your social life.

From my point of view, wearing
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fashionable
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clothes
is not per se a
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bad
thing,
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but
it can become in
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negative
if you
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start
to be obsessive about that. As I
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see
it,
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people
should avoid any mania about being trendy and
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just
getting
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used
to wearing the stuff you like no matter whether it is popular or not.

To sum up, fitting into modern society would
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explain
why
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people
like to
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wear
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fashionable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
clothes
such as suits, hats or shirts. To be honest, I believe that being
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fashionable
can become a problem if
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
to be obsessive about the stuff they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wear
rather
than focus on the way they are.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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Roger Ascham

IELTS essay Word framing is a person's way of describing a situation. The professor takes two examples to illustrate "word framing". Explain how the examples are related to the reading passage. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
261 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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