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1) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different. Use specific reasons to support your answer. v.2

1) People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different. Use specific reasons to support your answer. v. 2
I disagreed that people are never satisfied with what they have. In my openion people must satisfy from anything they have even its little or small even other people have other things or larger thing if we compare with others. Sometimes my son want some staff when he gets it he starts to discover another thing, i' m always telling him he should enjoy with whats new then he try to find something else but im always encourge him to read alot of books when he finshes them he can buy new one. So i really encourge people to satisfy whats they have for two reasons first people must should enjoy with whats they have because if they don' t that theykeep buy and buy without a pleasure of what they have and i think it will buld their trust by themself by not looking to others, second they should deal with whats they have as friend come in contact with it try to discover it, i remembered when i was young i asked my mom to bring me a doll when i bought it i was so happy with it i spent alot of times to play with it to talk with it i consedered it as a sister i kept it for years i did her hair i washed it i used my other staff for it then I thought to buy another thats why i said the people should satisfy whats they have to bring its benefit for them.
I disagreed that
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are never satisfied with what they have. In my
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openion
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people
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must
satisfy from anything they have even its
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little
or
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small
even
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other
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people
have
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other
things or larger thing if we compare with others.
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Sometimes
my son want
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some
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when he
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it he
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starts
to discover another thing,
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new then he
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try
to find something else
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but
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im
always
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encourge
him to read
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of books when he
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finshes
them he can
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buy
new one.
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i
really
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encourge
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people
to satisfy
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whats
they have for two reasons
first
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people
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should enjoy with
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they have
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because
if they
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#039; t that
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theykeep
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buy
and
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buy
without a pleasure of what they have and
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i
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it will
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buld
their trust by
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themself
by not looking to others, second they should deal with
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they have as friend
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in contact with it try to discover it,
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remembered when
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was young
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asked my mom to bring me a doll when
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i
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bought
it
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i
was
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so
happy with
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it
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i
spent
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alot
of times to play with it to talk with
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it
i
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consedered
it as a sister
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i
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kept
it for years
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i
did her hair
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i
washed it
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i
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used
my
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other
staff for it then I
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thought
to
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buy
another
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why
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i
said the
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people
should satisfy
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whats
they
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have to
bring its benefit for them.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
13Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
35Mistakes

IELTS essay 1) People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different. Use specific reasons to support your answer. v. 2

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
252 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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