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Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice Write a letter to your friend in your letter say why a driving licence is advantageous recommend a driving school give any extra guidance tips v.1

Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice Write a letter to your friend in your letter say why a driving licence is advantageous recommend a driving school give any extra guidance tips v. 1
Dear Ankita, I hope you are enjoying your time in Bangalore. It has been a long time since you have shifted to the new city. Due to work it is very difficult to take some time out to meet. Yesterday, I met Animesh and he told me that you are planning to apply for a driving licence. I recently got my driving licence and found that it is really beneficial to have it. Using public transportation now-a-days has become very frustrating with increasing commuters. Hence, having driving licence gives us freedom to drive anywhere we want. Even my parents are happy that I can drop them to their clubs whenever they require. In Bangalore, there are numerous driving schools but the most famous one is the Zoom Driving School. My cousin took driving lessons from there and has provided a very positive feedback about it. As a recent learner, I would like to give you some suggestions. Firstly, you should never argue with the trainer while taking driving lessons as most of the times they give you proper advice and by arguing we just make their job complicated. My other advice would be to be confident about yourself as confidence is the key to better learning. I wish you best of luck for your driving training. I hope we will meet soon. Yours, Anurag
Dear Ankita,

I hope you are enjoying your
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in Bangalore. It has been a long
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time
since you have shifted to the new city. Due to work it is
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very
difficult to take
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some
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time
out to
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meet
. Yesterday, I met
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Animesh and
he
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told
me that you are planning to apply for a
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driving
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licence
.

I recently
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got
my
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driving
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licence
and found that it is
really
beneficial to have it. Using public transportation
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now
-a-days has become
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very
frustrating with increasing commuters.
Hence
, having
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driving
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licence
gives us freedom to drive anywhere we want. Even my parents are happy that I can drop them to their clubs whenever they require.

In Bangalore, there are numerous
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driving
schools
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but
the most
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famous
one is the Zoom
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Driving
School. My cousin took
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driving
lessons from there and has provided a
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very
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positive
feedback about it.

As a recent learner, I would like to give you
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some
suggestions.
Firstly
, you should never argue with the trainer while taking
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driving
lessons as most of the
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times
they give you proper advice and by arguing we
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just
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make
their job complicated. My other advice would be to be confident about yourself as confidence is the key to better learning.

I wish you best of luck for your
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driving
training. I hope we will
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meet
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soon
.

Yours,

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Anurag
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IELTS academic Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice Write a letter to your friend in your letter say why a driving licence is advantageous recommend a driving school give any extra guidance tips v. 1

Academic
  American English
8 paragraphs
223 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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