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The chart compares average house prices in 5 different cities in the world from 1990 to 2002 with them in 1989. Units are measured in percentage. v.2

The chart compares average house prices in 5 different cities in the world from 1990 to 2002 with them in 1989. Units are measured in percentage. v. 2
The chart compares average house prices in 5 different cities in the world from 1990 to 2002 with them in 1989. Units are measured in percentage. In the period of 1990-1995, house prices in New York, Tokyo and London on average all fell down in comparison to them in 1989, as there was a 5%, 7. 5% and 7. 5% in those 3 cities respectively. Meanwhile, houses in Madrid and Frankfurt were more expensive than them one year ago, there was, however, only a slight growth in both as the prices went up by less than 3%. The chart shows contrasting information in 1996-2002 period. Except for a 5% fall in expenses of houses in Tokyo, houses in other four cities mentioned all cost more than they did in the last six-year-period. Average houses prices in New York and Madrid grew up for about 5%, while prices in London increased a considerable 12% compared to them in 1989. Overall there were increases and decreases in house prices in 5 cities and the changes were various.
The chart compares average
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in 5
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cities
in the world from 1990 to 2002 with them in 1989. Units
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in percentage.

In the period of 1990-1995,
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house
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prices
in New York, Tokyo and London on average all fell down
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to them in 1989, as there was a 5%, 7. 5% and 7. 5% in those 3
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cities
respectively
. Meanwhile,
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houses
in Madrid and Frankfurt were more expensive than them one year ago, there was,
however
,
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only
a slight growth in both as the
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went up by less than 3%.

The chart
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contrasting information in 1996-2002 period.
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a 5% fall in expenses of
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houses
in Tokyo,
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in other four
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mentioned all cost more than they did in the last six-year-period. Average
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houses
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prices
in New York and Madrid grew up for about 5%, while
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prices
in London increased a considerable 12% compared to them in 1989.

Overall
there were increases and decreases in
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house
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prices
in 5
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cities
and the
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changes
were various.
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IELTS academic The chart compares average house prices in 5 different cities in the world from 1990 to 2002 with them in 1989. Units are measured in percentage. v. 2

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