Dear Robert,
Hi there, I hope you' re enjoying your college year. Thanks very much for asking me to come and visit you in Singapore. As you know, I haven' t travelled to Asia before, so I though I' d write and ask you a few questions.
I want to bring a present with me and I wondered what would be appropriate. Perhaps you could let me know what your mum' s hobbies are and then I could come up with an idea based on one of them.
Also, what sort of clothes should I bring? I know it' s pretty warm where you live but do I need jumpers or a coat? what sort of activities are we likely to do while I' m there and should I bring things like swimming gear or trainers.
Lastly, I hate to be nuisance but I hope you remember that I' m vegetarian. I do eat fish and eggs but I don' t eat red meat and chicken at all. Is that going to be a problem?
Look forward to hearing from you.
Barnaby
Dear Robert,
Hi there, I hope
you&
#039; re enjoying your college year. Thanks
very
much for asking me to
come
and visit you in Singapore. As you know, I
haven&
#039; t travelled to Asia
before
,
so
I though
I&
#039; d write and ask you a few questions.
I want to bring a present with me and I wondered what would be appropriate. Perhaps you could
let
me know what your
mum&
#039; s hobbies are and then I could
come
up with an
idea
based on one of them.
Also
, what sort of clothes should I bring? I know
it&
#039; s pretty warm where you
live
but
do I need jumpers or a coat?
what
sort of activities
are
we likely to do while
I&
#039; m there and should I bring things like swimming gear or trainers.
Lastly
, I hate to be nuisance
but
I hope you remember that
I&
#039; m vegetarian. I do eat fish and eggs
but
I
don&
#039; t eat red meat and chicken at all. Is that going to be a problem?
Look forward to hearing from you.
Barnaby
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