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A friend you met last year has invited you to visit them in their country You have never been there before and need some information before you leave Write a letter to your friend In your letter request advice about a gift for his her family ask about act v.2

A friend you met last year has invited you to visit them in their country You have never been there before and need some information before you leave Write a letter to your friend In your letter request advice about a gift for his her family ask about act v. 2
Dear Robert, Hi there, I hope you' re enjoying your college year. Thanks very much for asking me to come and visit you in Singapore. As you know, I haven' t travelled to Asia before, so I though I' d write and ask you a few questions. I want to bring a present with me and I wondered what would be appropriate. Perhaps you could let me know what your mum' s hobbies are and then I could come up with an idea based on one of them. Also, what sort of clothes should I bring? I know it' s pretty warm where you live but do I need jumpers or a coat? what sort of activities are we likely to do while I' m there and should I bring things like swimming gear or trainers. Lastly, I hate to be nuisance but I hope you remember that I' m vegetarian. I do eat fish and eggs but I don' t eat red meat and chicken at all. Is that going to be a problem? Look forward to hearing from you. Barnaby
Dear Robert,

Hi there, I hope
you&
#039; re enjoying your college year. Thanks
very
much for asking me to
come
and visit you in Singapore. As you know, I
haven&
#039; t travelled to Asia
before
,
so
I though
I&
#039; d write and ask you a few questions.

I want to bring a present with me and I wondered what would be appropriate. Perhaps you could
let
me know what your
mum&
#039; s hobbies are and then I could
come
up with an
idea
based on one of them.

Also
, what sort of clothes should I bring? I know
it&
#039; s pretty warm where you
live
but
do I need jumpers or a coat?
what
sort of activities
are
we likely to do while
I&
#039; m there and should I bring things like swimming gear or trainers.

Lastly
, I hate to be nuisance
but
I hope you remember that
I&
#039; m vegetarian. I do eat fish and eggs
but
I
don&
#039; t eat red meat and chicken at all. Is that going to be a problem?

Look forward to hearing from you.

Barnaby
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes

IELTS academic A friend you met last year has invited you to visit them in their country You have never been there before and need some information before you leave Write a letter to your friend In your letter request advice about a gift for his her family ask about act v. 2

Academic
  American English
7 paragraphs
181 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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