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You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. 1. Say why he would not enjoy going to college2. Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her3. Su v.8

You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. 1. Say why he would not enjoy going to college2. Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her3. Su v. 8
Dear Wahyu, Hello Wahyu, I am your friend, Wiwi. I send to you a letter because I am carrying of you, while that I too curious with your plan which you have decide. Would you register in University or apply for a job? I want to give you several considerations about the job and college. The first, in college is not enjoyable in contrast, you will feel uncomfortable there because many subjects that make you stress to face them as well as you should study in every moment then less of time to take a rest. It is better if you register in a job, it is due to there are several benefits of it such as you can get a good salary, you can collect your money for your future planning in addition, you will not need a lesson task to improve your value, just make some experiences then you reach your ambition. In this change, I will give you a recommendation work that is suitable with you. I know that you ha a capability in IT, therefore it is good for you to becoming an operator in film production, because you prefer like to edit videos, it is the best to be an editor of it. I hope you can consider my recommendation to you, I hope you your happiness my friend. by Wiwi
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Hello
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Wahyu
, I am your friend,
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Wiwi
. I
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I am carrying of you, while that I too curious with your plan which you have decide. Would you register in University or apply for a job?

I want to give you several considerations about the job and college. The
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in contrast
, you will feel uncomfortable there
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because
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many
subjects that
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make
you
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stress
to face them
as well
as you should study in every moment then less of time to take a rest. It is better if you register in a job, it is due to there are several benefits of it such as you can
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get
a
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good
salary, you can collect your money for your future planning
in addition
, you will not need a lesson task to
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improve
your value,
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just
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make
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some
experiences then you reach your ambition.

In this
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change
, I will give you a recommendation work
that is
suitable with you. I know that you ha a capability in IT,
therefore
it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
for you to becoming an operator in film production,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
you prefer like to edit videos, it is the best to be an editor of it. I hope you can consider my recommendation to you, I hope you your happiness my friend.

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by
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Wiwi
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
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IELTS academic You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. 1. Say why he would not enjoy going to college2. Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her3. Su v. 8

Academic
  American English
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225 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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