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You have a friend who lives in a city abroad Yo have decide that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in the city Write a letter to your friend In your letter Explain what you would like to do Explain what kind of work or studies v.2

You have a friend who lives in a city abroad Yo have decide that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in the city Write a letter to your friend In your letter Explain what you would like to do Explain what kind of work or studies v. 2
Hello Suresh, How are you? How is your job going? I hope you are doing well in your career. I am writing this letter to seek your help to get information about computer science courses available at Newark institute of technology. As you already know, I am working as a senior software engineer since last 5 years and I also talked with you on my future study plan. I searched on the Internet for masters courses available at some of the reputed colleges in your city and found that Newark institute of technology has variety of courses available to choose. So as you are living there, I actually want your favor. I want you to contact Computer science department of the college in person and inquire about master course requirement for embedded system stream. I know that you are busy with your job but it would be great for me if you can help me out in this. Also give my regards to uncle and aunt and hope we will meet soon. Best wishes, Pratik Shah
Hello Suresh,

How are you? How is your job going? I hope you are doing well in your career. I am writing this letter to seek your
help
to
get
information about computer science
courses
available at Newark institute of technology.

As you already know, I am working as a senior software engineer since last 5 years and I
also
talked with you on my future study plan. I searched on the Internet for masters
courses
available at
some of the
reputed colleges in your city and found that Newark institute of technology has variety of
courses
available to choose.
So
as you are living there, I actually want your favor. I want you to contact Computer science department of the college in person and inquire about master
course
requirement for embedded system stream.

I know that you are busy with your job
but
it would be great for me if you can
help
me out in this.
Also
give my regards to uncle and aunt and hope we will
meet
soon
.

Best wishes,

Pratik
Shah
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS academic You have a friend who lives in a city abroad Yo have decide that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in the city Write a letter to your friend In your letter Explain what you would like to do Explain what kind of work or studies v. 2

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6 paragraphs
175 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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