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You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do abo v.9

You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do abo v. 9
Last week, I traveled from Delhi to Mumbai in your spice jet airplane. On visiting the destination, while waiting to collect my suitcase at the luggage counter I found it missing. I was surprised as I have never encountered such problem. On checking with officials they assure me that my suitcase is safe and might be lost in transit. They told me to go home as they will inform me on recovering it. It is over a week now and I have not heard anything from you. I am again describing the details of the briefcase so that you can expedite your search. The item which is lost is a handheld bag which opens with a combinational lock. I work with a multinational company and that bag contains some important and confidential details of our company' s coming projects. So, it is an absolute necessary for me. Now, what I want from your side is to know why such delay is happening? In this matter, I have also filed a F. I. R with a local police station. I never expected such a hopeless search from a renowned airline. On receiving this letter I believe you will certainly respond at the earliest and will let me know about your further action. I am also enclosing a copy of this to the local newspaper so that they should also know about irresponsible behavior. I am looking forward to hear from you.
Last week, I traveled from Delhi to Mumbai in your spice jet airplane. On visiting the destination, while waiting to collect my suitcase at the luggage counter I found it missing. I
was surprised
as I have never encountered such problem. On checking with officials they assure me that my suitcase is safe and might
be lost
in transit. They
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
me to go home as they will inform me on recovering it. It is over a week
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
and I have not heard anything from you. I am again describing the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
of the briefcase
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that you can expedite your search.

The item which
is lost
is a handheld bag which opens with a
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combinational
lock. I work with a multinational
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
and that bag contains
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
and confidential
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
of our
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company&
#039; s coming projects.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, it is an absolute necessary for me.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
, what I want from your side is to know why such delay is happening? In this matter, I have
also
filed
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
F. I. R with a local police station. I never
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expected
such a hopeless search from a renowned airline. On receiving this letter I believe you will
certainly
respond at the earliest and will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know about your
further
action. I am
also
enclosing a copy of this to the local newspaper
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that they should
also
know about irresponsible behavior.

I am looking forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".
to hear
from you.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS academic You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do abo v. 9

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
240 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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