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You rented a car from a Car Rental Company. The air conditioner has stopped working. You phoned the company a week ago but it still has not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter- introduce yourself- explain the situation- say what ac v.4

You rented a car from a Car Rental Company. The air conditioner has stopped working. You phoned the company a week ago but it still has not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter- introduce yourself- explain the situation- say what ac v. 4

Dear Sir, This is to state that I rented a car from your company two months ago. I am a civil engineer who is working in your city on a temporary basis and my job requires travelling long distances in the day-time. Therefore, a car with a working air-conditioner is a pre-requisite for me. I am writing this letter to bring to your urgent notice that my car' s air-conditioner suddenly broke down a week ago for which I had telephoned your company to arrange for its repair but up till now I have not received any such help. Hence, I urge you to send a personnel from your company to my address as soon as possible so that the air-conditioner of my car is repaired without further ado. Hoping for a prompt action on your part. Sincerely, Roman.

Dear Sir,

This is to state that I rented a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 from your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 two months ago. I am a civil engineer who is working in your city on a temporary basis and my job requires travelling long distances in the day-time. Therefore
, a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 with a working air-conditioner is a Possible spelling mistake found.prerequisite
pre-requisite
 for me.

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car&
#039; s air-conditioner suddenly
 broke down a week ago for which I had telephoned your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 to arrange for its repair This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 up till This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 I have not received any such This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
. Hence
, I urge you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 a personnel from your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 to my address as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that the air-conditioner of my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
is repaired
 without further
 ado.

Hoping for a prompt action on your part.

Sincerely
,

Roman. 

4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS academic You rented a car from a Car Rental Company. The air conditioner has stopped working. You phoned the company a week ago but it still has not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter- introduce yourself- explain the situation- say what ac v. 4

Academic

American English

6 paragraphs

139 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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