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You rented a car from a Car Rental Company. The air conditioner has stopped working. You phoned the company a week ago but it still has not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter- introduce yourself- explain the situation- say what ac v.4

You rented a car from a Car Rental Company. The air conditioner has stopped working. You phoned the company a week ago but it still has not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter- introduce yourself- explain the situation- say what ac v. 4
Dear Sir, This is to state that I rented a car from your company two months ago. I am a civil engineer who is working in your city on a temporary basis and my job requires travelling long distances in the day-time. Therefore, a car with a working air-conditioner is a pre-requisite for me. I am writing this letter to bring to your urgent notice that my car' s air-conditioner suddenly broke down a week ago for which I had telephoned your company to arrange for its repair but up till now I have not received any such help. Hence, I urge you to send a personnel from your company to my address as soon as possible so that the air-conditioner of my car is repaired without further ado. Hoping for a prompt action on your part. Sincerely, Roman.
Dear Sir,

This is to state that I rented a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
from your
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company
two months ago. I am a civil engineer who is working in your city on a temporary basis and my job requires travelling long distances in the day-time.
Therefore
, a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
with a working air-conditioner is a
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pre-requisite
for me.

I am writing this letter to bring to your urgent notice that my
Possible spelling mistake found.
car&
#039; s air-conditioner
suddenly
broke down a week ago for which I had telephoned your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
to arrange for its repair
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
up till
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
I have not received any such
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
.
Hence
, I urge you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
a personnel from your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
to my address as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that the air-conditioner of my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
is repaired
without
further
ado.

Hoping for a prompt action on your part.

Sincerely
,

Roman.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS academic You rented a car from a Car Rental Company. The air conditioner has stopped working. You phoned the company a week ago but it still has not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter- introduce yourself- explain the situation- say what ac v. 4

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  American English
6 paragraphs
139 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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