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You are expriencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain1. Why you are writing to him2. Why you cannot pay the rent3. When you will pay the rent. v.2

You are expriencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain1. Why you are writing to him2. Why you cannot pay the rent3. When you will pay the rent. v. 2
Dear Mr. Singh, I am writing to you request that you allow me to pay house rent later in this month. I have been your tenant from last one year. Since then i have always paid my dues on time. However, this time around the company in which i am working has hold up everyone' s salary this month due to some mismatch in their financial records. Everyone is so agitated as salary is their main source of income. After the meeting between employees union and management it has been mutually decided that finances would be cleared by the end of the month. I can assure you that as soon as my salary is credited i will pay you but not later than 30th of September. I apologize to you for any inconvenience caused by me. I believe this will be acceptable to you. please contact me if it is a problem for you. Yours faithfully, Maninder singh
Dear Mr. Singh,

I am writing to you request that you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
me to pay
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
rent later in this month.

I have been your tenant from last one year.
“Since” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since
then
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
have always paid my dues on time.
However
, this time around the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
in which
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am working has hold up
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everyone&
#039; s salary this month due to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
mismatch in their financial records. Everyone is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
agitated as salary is their main source of income. After the meeting between employees union and management it has been
mutually
decided that finances would
be cleared
by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of the month.

I can assure you that as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as my salary
is credited
Did you mean "I"?
i
will pay you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
not later than 30th of September. I apologize to you for any inconvenience caused by me.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
believe this will be acceptable to you.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
please
contact me if it is a problem for you.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Maninder
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singh
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes
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IELTS academic You are expriencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain1. Why you are writing to him2. Why you cannot pay the rent3. When you will pay the rent. v. 2

Academic
  American English
6 paragraphs
157 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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