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You are expriencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain1. Why you are writing to him2. Why you cannot pay the rent3. When you will pay the rent. v.2

You are expriencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain1. Why you are writing to him2. Why you cannot pay the rent3. When you will pay the rent. v. 2

Dear Mr. Singh, I am writing to you request that you allow me to pay house rent later in this month. I have been your tenant from last one year. Since then i have always paid my dues on time. However, this time around the company in which i am working has hold up everyone' s salary this month due to some mismatch in their financial records. Everyone is so agitated as salary is their main source of income. After the meeting between employees union and management it has been mutually decided that finances would be cleared by the end of the month. I can assure you that as soon as my salary is credited i will pay you but not later than 30th of September. I apologize to you for any inconvenience caused by me. I believe this will be acceptable to you. please contact me if it is a problem for you. Yours faithfully, Maninder singh

Dear Mr. Singh,

I am writing to you request that you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 me to pay This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 rent later in this month.

I have been your tenant from last one year. “Since” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since
 then Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 have always paid my dues on time. However
, this time around the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 in which Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 am working has hold up Possible spelling mistake found.everyone
everyone&
#039; s salary this month due to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 mismatch in their financial records. Everyone is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 agitated as salary is their main source of income. After the meeting between employees union and management it has been mutually
 decided that finances would be cleared
 by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the month.

I can assure you that as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as my salary is credited
Did you mean "I"?I
i
 will pay you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not later than 30th of September. I apologize to you for any inconvenience caused by me. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 believe this will be acceptable to you. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterPlease
please
 contact me if it is a problem for you.

Yours faithfully
,

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Maninder
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singh

1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS academic You are expriencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain1. Why you are writing to him2. Why you cannot pay the rent3. When you will pay the rent. v. 2

Academic

American English

6 paragraphs

157 words

5.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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