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Topic The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world and how the population is distributed Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below v.2

Topic The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world and how the population is distributed Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below v. 2
The three pie charts give information about the average spending on daily necessities, the demographic and the level of resources exploitation worldwide. In overall, money allocated for food and other stuff is highest compared to transport and housing. Furthermore, although Asia has the highest population figure, yet USA and Europe are reported to outnumber other continents in terms of resources consumption. In the first pie chart, ordinary folks are likely to spend more money on Others and Food Category, with 40% and 24% expenditure recorded respectively. While Transport and Housing observe less than 20% of spending worldwide. As can be seen from the second and the third pie chart, Africa has the lowest figure for population density (10%), only one-sixth compared to Asia, which is the most crowded continent with more than a half (57%) of people residing in. Meanwhile, although accounting merely 14% each, Europe and America lead the world in terms of resources consumption, with 60% of materials used for both continents.
The three pie charts give information about the average spending on daily necessities, the demographic and the level of resources exploitation worldwide.

In
overall
, money allocated for food and other stuff is highest compared to transport and housing.
Furthermore
, although Asia has the highest population figure,
yet
USA and Europe
are reported
to outnumber other continents in terms of resources consumption.

In the
first
pie chart, ordinary folks are likely to spend more money on Others and Food Category, with 40% and 24% expenditure recorded
respectively
. While Transport and Housing observe less than 20% of spending worldwide.

As can be
seen
from the second and the third pie chart, Africa has the lowest figure for population density (10%),
only
one-sixth compared to Asia, which is the most crowded continent with more than a half (57%) of
people
residing in. Meanwhile, although accounting
merely
14% each, Europe and America lead the world in terms of resources consumption, with 60% of materials
used
for both continents.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS academic Topic The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world and how the population is distributed Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below v. 2

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4 paragraphs
164 words
7.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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