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You are going away to travel for the summer. A friend will be looking after your house while you are away. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - say where you are going- describe your house- explain some of the things your friend must do to look v.8

You are going away to travel for the summer. A friend will be looking after your house while you are away. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - say where you are going- describe your house- explain some of the things your friend must do to look v. 8
Dear friend, Thank you in advance for looking after my house and my beloved dogs in my absence. I am excited to travel to Canada. It is a dream come true for me. I just want to let you know few things you need to take care of. The water in tank lasts for 12 hours so you need to reinforce the supply every evening. In the garden area renovation work is in progress so you can not access it for few days. The garage opens from inside. An automation button is placed just under the stairs to open it. I need to mention a couple of things which you must do in case you step out of the house. There is a burglar alarm in the kitchen so please turn it on before leaving premises. The code to switch it off is 0729. I would be grateful if you feed my dogs on daily basis. Last but not the least, in case of any emergency please feel free to contact me at my hotel number 042467821. I owe a treat to you for this help. Thank you once again for your generosity. Yours faithfully, Maninder
Dear friend,

Thank you in advance for looking after my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
and my beloved dogs in my absence. I
am excited
to travel to Canada. It is a dream
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come
true for me.

I
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just
want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
you know few things you need to take care of. The water in tank lasts for 12 hours
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
you need to reinforce the supply every evening. In the garden area renovation work is in progress
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
you can not access it for few days. The garage opens from inside. An automation button
is placed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
under the stairs to open it.

I need to mention a couple of things which you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
do in case you step out of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
. There is a burglar alarm in the kitchen
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
turn it on
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before
leaving premises. The code to switch it off is 0729. I would be grateful if you feed my dogs on daily basis.

Last
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
not the least, in case of any emergency
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
feel free to contact me at my hotel number 042467821. I owe a treat to you for this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
.

Thank you once again for your generosity.

Yours
faithfully
,

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IELTS academic You are going away to travel for the summer. A friend will be looking after your house while you are away. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - say where you are going- describe your house- explain some of the things your friend must do to look v. 8

Academic
  American English
8 paragraphs
195 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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