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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecti v.61

The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.
The graphs show the percentage of the population of a computer ownership between 2002 and 2010 and a computer ownership by education level by the year 2002 and 2010. The first graph, the percentage of computer ownership without education was the lowest by 58% in 2002. The percentage of computer ownership was slightly grown 80% in 2004. Moreover, computer ownership was rising 68% and 75% between 2006 and 2008. In 2010, computer ownership was the highest percentage of 80%. The second graph, The percentage of computer ownership by education level in 2010 the highest proportion was a postgraduate by 90%. Moreover, the percentage of computer ownership by education level was college (incomplete) by 80% in 2010. In 2002, a high school graduate by 35% and bachelor' s degree by 55%. On the other hand, the lowest percentage of computer ownership by education level was no high school diploma by 15% in 2002 To conclusion, the percentage of both computer ownership without education and the proportion of computer ownership by educating level was rising in 2010.
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between 2002 and 2010 and a computer
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by the year 2002 and 2010.

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was the lowest by 58% in 2002.
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was rising 68% and 75% between 2006 and 2008. In 2010, computer
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was the highest
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The second graph, The
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in 2010 the highest proportion was a postgraduate by 90%.
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, the
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of computer
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by
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was college (incomplete) by 80% in 2010. In 2002, a high school graduate by 35% and
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of computer
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was no high school diploma by 15% in 2002

To conclusion, the
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of both computer
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without
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and the proportion of computer
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by educating
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was rising in 2010.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
30Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS academic The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.

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4 paragraphs
175 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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