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The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.

The given maps illustrate the developments that occured at the seaside resort of Templeton from 1990 to 2005. According to the maps, in 1990 the seaside resort was much greaner rural area with many trees, detached houses, public facilities such a school, hospital and railway station, but during the next 15 years this place witnessed dramatic changes. The most noticable is that almost all of trees were chopped down, small houses were demolished and replaced by multi-storey apartment blocks. Moreover, a new industrial estate with factory, supermarket and airport sprang up there. Only a few trees near the lake were left. The railway way lengthened and it was located along the coastline. Another interesting development was construction of ferryfonth of the railway station. Overall, there was a complete transformation of the seaside resort of Templeton, from a rural to a mainly urban area.

IELTS academic You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons wher v.39

The
given
maps illustrate the developments that
occured
at the seaside resort of Templeton from 1990 to 2005.

According to the maps, in 1990 the seaside resort was much
greaner
rural area with
many
trees, detached
houses
, public facilities such a school, hospital and railway station,
but
during the
next
15 years this place witnessed dramatic
changes
. The most
noticable
is that almost
all of trees
were chopped
down,
small
houses
were demolished
and replaced by
multi-storey
apartment blocks.
Moreover
, a new industrial estate with factory, supermarket and airport sprang up there.

Only
a few trees near the lake were
left
. The railway way lengthened and it
was located
along the coastline. Another interesting development was construction of
ferryfonth
of the railway station.

Overall
, there was a complete transformation of the seaside resort of Templeton, from a rural to a
mainly
urban area.
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