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the maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.3

the maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville.
The two maps indicate the main changes which have taken place in the town of Kimsville between the year 2002 and today. Overall, It is noticed that Kimsville has become much more modern city, with more buildings and transport facilities. It can be seen that the west of the city used to be a green area with a lot of trees, but the trees have been cut down to make way for new apartments and football stadium. It has been urbanized since 2002. Another striking change is that a new train station has been constructed, which contribute on developing of transport. If we look at the cinema in 2002, it has been turned into a pub, where makes the city more vibrant. A final interesting development has been the conversion of a factory, which used to a concern of pollution because of its smoke, replacing by a software company.
The two maps indicate the main
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changes
which have taken place in the town of
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Kimsville
between the year 2002 and
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today
.

Overall
, It
is noticed
that
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Kimsville
has become much more modern city, with more buildings and transport facilities.

It can be
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seen
that the west of the city
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used
to be a green area with
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a lot of
trees,
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but
the trees have been
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cut
down to
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make
way for new apartments and football stadium. It has
been urbanized
since 2002. Another striking
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change
is that a new train station has
been constructed
, which contribute on developing of transport.

If we look at the cinema in 2002, it has
been turned
into a pub, where
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
the city more vibrant. A final interesting development has been the conversion of a factory, which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to a concern of pollution
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because
of its smoke, replacing by a software
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS academic the maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
149 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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