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The maps below show the changes that take place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. v.2

The maps below show the changes that take place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.
The maps describe the development which took place on the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005. In general, the village witnessed significant changes with most tree disappearing and big houses mushrooming. To specify, in the north, some individual houses were demolished while others we relocated and an airport was constructed after around a decade. However, a hospital, a school, and a lake were still there over the years. By comparison, in the north, the rate of growth was more noticeable. For example, over fifteen years almost the trees and personal houses were destroyed to give way to a supermarket, a factory and a series of big building beside the sea. The striking point was that only by dint of the extension of the railway station from the est to the west was the traveling easier for citizens. In conclusion, the resort became more modern but less environment-friendly.
The maps
describe
the development which took place on the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.

In general
, the village witnessed significant
changes
with most tree disappearing and
big
houses
mushrooming.

To specify, in the north,
some
individual
houses
were demolished
while others we relocated and an airport
was constructed
after around a decade.
However
, a hospital, a school, and a lake were
still
there over the years.

By comparison, in the north, the rate of growth was more noticeable.
For example
, over fifteen years almost the trees and personal
houses
were
destroyed
to give way to a supermarket, a factory and a series of
big
building beside the sea. The striking point was that
only
by dint of the extension of the railway station from the est to the west was the traveling easier for citizens.

In conclusion
, the resort became more modern
but
less environment-friendly.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS academic The maps below show the changes that take place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
149 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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