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This pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made
The pictures highlight the process by which tomato ketchup is produced and packed in order to be sold to customers. It is noticed that there are 15 stages in the diagram, starting with harvesting tomatoes and finishing with using tomato ketchup as a flavor with some dishes at home. The first step is that tomatoes are picked and the put in baskets. After that, they are divided into 2 groups: good and bad tomatoes so that tomato ketchup can get a high quality as possible. Good tomatoes are continuously delivered to factories, where they are removed some unnecessary parts, included removing stalks, skin, seeds. Having been stored in a container, tomatoes are crushed to become liquid. At this point, sugar, salt, vinegar are added. The next step is that the liquid is boiled and then left about 2 hours in order to get a right temperature. After steps making tomatoes ketchup, it is poured into bottles, which are then labeled. Before being packed into boxes, the bottles are checked quality. Following this, these boxes are loaded onto lorries, which take them to supermarkets. The final step is that you buy a bottle of tomatoes ketchup and enjoy with hamburger and fries.
The pictures highlight the process by which tomato
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ketchup
is produced
and packed in order to
be sold
to customers.

It
is noticed
that there are 15 stages in the diagram, starting with harvesting tomatoes and finishing with using tomato
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ketchup
as a flavor with
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some
dishes at home.

The
first
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step
is that tomatoes
are picked
and the put in baskets. After that, they
are divided
into 2 groups:
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good
and
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bad
tomatoes
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so
that tomato
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ketchup
can
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get
a high quality as possible.
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Good
tomatoes are
continuously
delivered to factories, where they
are removed
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some
unnecessary parts, included removing stalks, skin, seeds. Having
been stored
in a container, tomatoes
are crushed
to become liquid. At this point, sugar, salt, vinegar are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
added
. The
next
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step
is that the liquid
is boiled
and then
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left
about 2 hours in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a right temperature.

After
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steps
making tomatoes
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ketchup
, it
is poured
into bottles, which are then labeled.
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Before
being packed
into boxes, the bottles are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
checked
quality. Following this, these boxes
are loaded
onto lorries, which take them to supermarkets. The final
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step
is that you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
a bottle of tomatoes
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ketchup
and enjoy with hamburger and fries.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
9Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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IELTS academic This pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
201 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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