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You are not happy about a service you received a couple of days ago from a company and you have decided to complain about it. Write a letter to the company to complain about the poor service you received from its employee. In your letter, express: why you we v.6

You are not happy about a service you received a couple of days ago from a company and you have decided to complain about it. Write a letter to the company to complain about the poor service you received from its employee. In your letter, express: why you we v. 6
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you to register a complaint against a poor service, and the rude attitude by your staff that I experienced last Monday when I visited your shop. I am playing you would take necessary steps sp that no other customer would get humiliated as I did. I went to you shop on 25th April to purchase a air conditioner and there was no one to assist me. All the staffs were busy playing Pubg in their mobile. When I asked for help to show the varieties, one of the staffs pointed another staff to assist me. But no one were happy to help the customer. I wasn' t asking for any help, rather you will be benefited if I would have taken the air conditioner from your shop. But, I will never think of visiting their shop nor I will recommend to any of my friends. I hope you will take necessary action against your staffs for poor customer service, else you will be on loss. Try recruiting some professional ones or train then to provide better customer service. Yours Faithfully, Simi
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you to register a complaint against a poor service, and the rude attitude by your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
staff
that I experienced last Monday when I visited your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shop
. I am playing you would take necessary steps
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sp
that no other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
customer
would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
humiliated as I did.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
went to you
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shop
on 25th April to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
air conditioner and there was no one to assist me. All the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
staffs
were busy playing
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Pubg
in their mobile. When I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
asked for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
the varieties, one of the
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staffs
pointed another
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staff
to assist me.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
no one were happy to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
customer
. I
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wasn&
#039; t asking for any
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
,
rather
you will
be benefited
if I
Did you mean "had taken"?
would have taken
the air conditioner from your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shop
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
, I will never
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
of visiting their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shop
nor I will recommend to any of my friends.

I hope you will take necessary action against your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
staffs
for poor
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
customer
service, else you will be on loss. Try recruiting
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
professional ones or train then to provide better
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
customer
service.

Yours
Faithfully
,

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Simi
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
13Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS academic You are not happy about a service you received a couple of days ago from a company and you have decided to complain about it. Write a letter to the company to complain about the poor service you received from its employee. In your letter, express: why you we v. 6

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6 paragraphs
188 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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