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You are going to visit New Zealand for an English and Homestay program You have just received details of your homestay host family Write your first letter to the family In your letter introduce yourself ask the family some questions to get information tha v.2

You are going to visit New Zealand for an English and Homestay program You have just received details of your homestay host family Write your first letter to the family In your letter introduce yourself ask the family some questions to get information tha v. 2
Dear Mr. Pedro Gill, I' m Will Smith, and I' ve just received the details confirming an invitation for an ' English and Homestay' Program starting September 11 till December 20, 2014. I would like to thank you for being my host in an unknown place. I' m presently living with my Family in New Delhi, India. We are a family of two members; my mother and me. I have done post-graduation in information technology, and I' m looking forward to improve my skills in English language during the stay. I' ll appreciate if you can share some information about your family and its lifestyle. To begin with, I would like to ask about your usual diet. It is important for me as I am a vegetarian. Furthermore, I would like to know about your family values like time to wake up and sleep, usual activities that your family does on weekends, if there is any special occasion that will come during my stay. Also, certain specific standards that you may expect your guest to maintain. This will help me prepare in advance for my stay and be as much better a guest as possible. I have booked my air tickets and my flight will arrive in Auckland on 9 September at 10: 00 am. Should you require any more information regarding my stay, I' ll be more than happy to furnish the details. Once again, thanks for being my host. Yours Sincerely, Will Smith
Dear Mr. Pedro Gill,

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confirming an invitation for an ' English and
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#039; Program starting September 11 till December 20, 2014. I would like to thank you for being my host in an unknown place.

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living with my
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in New Delhi, India. We are a
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family
of two members; my mother and me. I have done post-graduation in information technology, and
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I&
#039; m looking forward to
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improve
my
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skills
in English language during the stay.

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#039; ll appreciate if you can share
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some
information about your
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family
and its lifestyle. To
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begin
with, I would like to ask about your usual diet. It is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
for me as I am a vegetarian.
Furthermore
, I would like to know about your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
values like time to wake up and sleep, usual activities that your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
does on weekends, if there is any special occasion that will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
during my stay.
Also
, certain specific standards that you may
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expect
your guest to maintain. This will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me prepare in advance for my stay and be as much better a guest as possible.

I have booked my air tickets and my flight will arrive in Auckland on 9 September at 10: 00 am.

Should you require any more information regarding my stay,
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I&
#039; ll be more than happy to furnish the
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details
.

Once again, thanks for being my host.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Will Smith
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS academic You are going to visit New Zealand for an English and Homestay program You have just received details of your homestay host family Write your first letter to the family In your letter introduce yourself ask the family some questions to get information tha v. 2

Academic
  American English
9 paragraphs
244 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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