You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter: •introduce yourself•explain what experie v.10
You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter: •introduce yourself•explain what experie v. 10
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing this letter to apply for holiday job posting which has been advertised in daily Newspaper. I am a 24-year-old student, studying my bachelor degree in Cambridge University. Though I am from one of the South East countries, I do speak English fluently. At present, I am very keen to have a holiday job this summer.
My term finishes on 5 July and I am free until 20 September. Last year I had worked in a restaurant as a servant and I got a chance to meet the people all over the world. That was a fascinating experience. This year I would like to expand my wings, looking have a more interesting and satisfying job. I would say, working in a museum might give a chance for me to explore more about the history and meet the different ethnic groups.
I enjoy going into the museums and am particularly keen on history. I have been in your museum several times and I am familiar with the historical objects and Heritage of the museum. I do hope you will be interested in my application.
I look forward to hearing from you in the near future.
Yours faithfully,
Dimitris Boudramis
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing this letter to apply for holiday job posting which has
been advertised
in daily Newspaper. I am a 24-year-
old
student, studying my bachelor degree in Cambridge University. Though I am from one of the South East countries, I do speak English
fluently
. At present, I am
very
keen to have a holiday job this summer.
My term finishes on 5
July and
I am free until 20 September. Last year I had worked in a restaurant as a servant and I
got
a chance to
meet
the
people
all over the world. That was a fascinating experience. This year I would like to expand my wings, looking have a more interesting and satisfying job. I would say, working in a
museum
might give a chance for me to explore more about the history and
meet
the
different
ethnic groups.
I enjoy going into the
museums
and am
particularly
keen on history.
I
have been in your
museum
several
times and
I am familiar with the historical objects and Heritage of the
museum
.
I
do hope you will
be interested
in my application.
I
look forward to hearing from you in the near future.
Yours
faithfully
,
Dimitris
Boudramis
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes