Dear Amar,
How are you? Hope you are doing well and enjoying your holidays. Many thanks for considering me and giving me an opportunity to take care of your house in your absence. As discussed previously I am looking for a bigger house for 2 weeks as my parents would be here to meet me and my wife. Definitely your house had really solved my purpose.
Just for your information, yesterday while doing cleaning in your house I unfortunately damage one of the bedrooms window glass. This is the reason, I am writing to you now to inform about this incident. Moreover in this accident I hurt my right hand very badly.
I know probably after reading this letter you would be worried about the safety of an apartment as I know last month only you had renovated your complete home. However, I would like to assure you that please do not take tension about this as I would arrange for fix and bear all the expenses.
In fact I had already spoken to one of the workers in our area and he had agreed to change the complete glass of a window after New Year eve. Once again I am really sorry to bother you on your holidays.
Regards
Sunil
Dear Amar,
How are you? Hope you are doing well and enjoying your holidays.
Many
thanks for considering me and giving me an opportunity to take care of your
house
in your absence. As discussed previously I am looking for a bigger
house
for 2 weeks as my parents would be here to
meet
me and my wife. Definitely your
house
had
really
solved my purpose.
Just
for your information, yesterday while
doing cleaning
in your
house
I unfortunately damage one of the bedrooms window glass. This is the reason, I am writing to you
now
to inform about this incident.
Moreover
in this accident I hurt my right hand
very
badly
.
I know
probably
after reading this letter you would
be worried
about the safety of an apartment as I know last month
only
you had renovated your complete home.
However
, I would like to assure you that
please
do not take tension about this as I would arrange for
fix
and bear all the expenses.
In
fact I
had already spoken to one of the workers in our
area and
he had
agreed
to
change
the complete glass of a window after New Year eve.
Once
again I am
really
sorry to bother you on your holidays.
Regards
Sunil
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