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You cannot go to a company where you got an offer Write a letter to the HR supervisor to explain the reason why you decline the offer express you gratitude explain you like your current job very much v.2

You cannot go to a company where you got an offer Write a letter to the HR supervisor to explain the reason why you decline the offer express you gratitude explain you like your current job very much v. 2
Dear Sir, First of all thanks for offering me a position in your reputed organization. However, due to some personal reasons I will not be able to accept the offer made by your company to me. I can understand the amount of time and resources your company has wasted on my interview. This is the reason I am writing to you now for expressing my gratitude. Since last year I have attended couple of job interviews, but I never received such a better hospitality; especially that I received from your employees. I am really sorry for not joining your offer, probably, after reading this letter you will come to know the reason why I am not joining your organization. Before receiving a joining letter I was under impression that your company is taking the interview for a position in our city. However, it was my mistake I never asked your company during the job interview. The main reason for not joining the job is as I do not want to travel to other city leaving my family alone here. Actually, my mother in law treatment is going in our city hospital and as her condition is in the recovering stage, I do not want to disturb her treatment. Moreover, recently my company had given me a promotion that was pending from last year. So, after receiving my promotion my new salary structure is almost the same like you offer to me. Therefore, after discussed with my family I have decided to turn down the offer. I am really sorry for any inconvenience caused to your company Yours faithfully James
Dear Sir,

First of all
thanks for offering me a position in your reputed organization.
However
, due to
some
personal
reasons
I will not be able to accept the
offer
made by your
company
to me. I can understand the amount of time and resources your
company
has wasted on my
interview
. This is the
reason
I am writing to you
now
for expressing my gratitude.

Since last year I have attended
couple of
job
interviews
,
but
I never received such a better hospitality;
especially
that I received from your employees. I am
really
sorry for not
joining
your
offer
,
probably
, after reading this letter you will
come
to know the
reason
why I am not
joining
your organization.

Before
receiving a
joining
letter I was under impression that your
company
is taking the
interview
for a position in our city.
However
, it was my mistake I never asked your
company
during the job
interview
. The main
reason
for not
joining
the job is as I do not want to travel to other city leaving my family alone here. Actually, my
mother in law
treatment is going in our city hospital and as her condition is in the recovering stage, I do not want to disturb her treatment.
Moreover
, recently my
company
had
given
me a promotion that was pending from last year.
So, after
receiving my promotion my new salary structure is almost the same
like
you
offer
to me.

Therefore
, after discussed with my family I have decided to turn down the
offer
. I am
really
sorry for any inconvenience caused to your
company


Yours
faithfully


James
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
21Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS academic You cannot go to a company where you got an offer Write a letter to the HR supervisor to explain the reason why you decline the offer express you gratitude explain you like your current job very much v. 2

Academic
  American English
7 paragraphs
268 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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