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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. Give reasons for your answer and include any relev v.19

Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. 19
Dear James, This is Gaurav living in flat number 204 in east London. I have taken this fully furnished property on rent from you last week. I didn’t get much time in weekdays to spend in flat due to busy work hours and mostly been outside during the evening so writing this letter to you today to bring attention towards a matter of concern related to the condition of the furniture in flat. Drawing room Sofa set and table are not in good shape, the table glass top is cracked from one side and the cover of the sofa set is torn from multiple places. Even the door of the living room almirah is not closing properly. It would be good if you can send a carpenter over the weekend to get them to repair as it is very uneasy and unhealthy for my kids and can cause injury if these items are leftover unfixed for long. Thank you in advance and hope for a quick response on this from your side. Thanks Gaurav Sharma
Dear James,

This is Gaurav living in flat number 204 in east London. I have taken this
fully
furnished property on rent from you last week. I didn’t
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get
much time in weekdays to spend in flat due to busy work hours and
mostly
been outside during the evening
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so
writing this letter to you
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today
to bring attention towards a matter of concern related to the condition of the furniture in flat.

Drawing room Sofa set and table are not in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
shape, the table glass top
is cracked
from one side and the cover of the sofa set
is torn
from multiple places. Even the door of the living room
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almirah
is not closing
properly
.

It would be
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good
if you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
a carpenter over the weekend to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
them to repair as it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
uneasy and unhealthy for my kids and can cause injury if these items are leftover unfixed for long.

Thank you in advance and hope for a quick response on this from your side.

Thanks

Gaurav Sharma
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS academic Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. 19

Academic
  American English
7 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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