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You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter• Explain why you have moved• Describe the new house• Invite your friend to come and visit v.7

You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter• Explain why you have moved• Describe the new house• Invite your friend to come and visit v. 7
Dear Hannah, I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to inform you that I have transferred to a new house. About a year ago, I received a notice that the building of the apartment where I was staying was bought by a local businessman. As soon as I got the advice, I then scouted for new accommodations way before the establishment was pulled down. I am now living in a 3 bedroom, two-storey house with a garage. Apart from that, I also have my own outdoor grilling station in my lawn. I am planning to throw a Wet n' Wild themed housewarming soiree on the 15th of June. I' ve customized a program including a variety of games for all my guests. My parents will be flying here to celebrate their anniversary as well and I would be delighted if you can come and see them. I will be sending an RSVP through email. Looking forward to hear from you soon. Best regards, Joyce Smith
Dear Hannah,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to inform you that I have transferred to a new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.

About a year ago, I received a notice that the building of the apartment where I was staying was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
by a local businessman. As
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soon
as I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
the advice, I then scouted for new accommodations way
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before
the establishment
was pulled
down. I am
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
living in a 3 bedroom,
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two-storey
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
with a garage. Apart from that, I
also
have my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
outdoor grilling station in my lawn.

I am planning to throw a Wet
Possible spelling mistake found.
n&
#039; Wild themed housewarming
'soiree' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "soirée"
soiree
on the 15th of June.
Possible spelling mistake found.
I&
#039; ve customized a program including a variety of games for all my guests. My parents will be flying here to celebrate their anniversary
as well
and I would
be delighted
if you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
them.

I will be sending an RSVP through email. Looking forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".
to hear
from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Best regards,

Joyce Smith
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
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IELTS academic You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter• Explain why you have moved• Describe the new house• Invite your friend to come and visit v. 7

Academic
  American English
7 paragraphs
167 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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