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Write a letter to one of your classmates and invite him to a class reunion. When and where is the party? Give some details about what is going to happen at the party. Tell him/her what you have been doing recently. v.2

Write a letter to one of your classmates and invite him to a class reunion. When and where is the party? Give some details about what is going to happen at the party. Tell him/her what you have been doing recently. v. 2
Dear Deboline, Hope this missive of mine find you and your family in revishing health. The main purpose of penning down this letter is to inviting you for a class reunion, at Hotel Peramount, Delhi on 5th of January 2019. It will be a great opportunity to retrospect our old college time, and find about new achievements each one of us got in life. All arrangements are done, the party will happen sharp at 5pm at evening, starting with some starters and beverages followed by main course and then desserts will serve. For recreational activities, we have planned some games and music, to surge in mirth and merriment. Apart from this it will be a golden opportunity to meet with you after long time, now I have a job in eminent multi national company as a Senior Engineer. I hope to see you at the party and please bring some apples from your home town I miss them a lot after college. With Love, ABC
Dear
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Deboline
,

Hope this missive of mine find you and your family in
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revishing
health. The main purpose of penning down this letter is
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to inviting
you for a
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class
reunion, at Hotel
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Peramount
, Delhi on 5th of January 2019.

It will be a great opportunity to retrospect our
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
college time, and find about new achievements each one of us
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
in life. All arrangements
are done
, the party will happen sharp at 5pm at evening, starting with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
starters and beverages followed by main course and then desserts will serve. For recreational activities, we have planned
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
games and music, to surge in mirth and merriment.

Apart from this it will be a golden opportunity to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
with you after long time,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
I have a job in eminent
This word is normally spelled as one.
multi national
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
as a Senior Engineer.

I hope to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you at the party and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
bring
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
apples from your home town I miss them a lot after college.

With
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Love
,

ABC
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS academic Write a letter to one of your classmates and invite him to a class reunion. When and where is the party? Give some details about what is going to happen at the party. Tell him/her what you have been doing recently. v. 2

Academic
  American English
7 paragraphs
164 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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