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Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - Provide a short update about your life since you saw him/her last - Explain why you will be traveling to his/her city- Say what you would like to do when you visit his/her city v.9

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - Provide a short update about your life since you saw him/her last - Explain why you will be traveling to his/her city- Say what you would like to do when you visit his/her city v. 9
Dear Nick, It' s been a long time since we met during the trip of Hongkong. It was memorable experience to spend time with you. Since then I have been involved in my travelling document work of my company and had a busy schedule, as company planned to send me for international assignments. And finally, all work is completed. I will be visiting to your city, Toronto by next Thursday in order to attend business seminar with client. The sole purpose of writing to you is to let you know in advance of my visit so we can again spend some time together and organize small trip in the city. I have come to know by internet surfing about the largest shopping mall in the city and few Canadian museums with wide collection of ancient items. If you are agree and time permits, we can surely plan to visit these places. I may not have sound understanding of places of your city so please you also suggest some places according to your knowledge and experience of the city. So spare some time and be ready for another trip. I hope to see you soon. Your Friend, Pritesh
Dear Nick,

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#039; s been a long
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time
since we met during the trip of
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Hongkong
. It was memorable experience to spend
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time
with you. Since
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then I
have
been involved
in my travelling document work of my
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company
and had a busy schedule, as
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company
planned to
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send
me for international assignments. And
finally
, all work
is completed
.

I will be visiting to your city, Toronto by
next
Thursday in order to attend business seminar with client. The sole purpose of writing to you is to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
you know in advance of my visit
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so
we can again spend
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some
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time
together and organize
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small
trip in the city. I have
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come
to know by internet surfing about the largest shopping mall in the city and few Canadian museums with wide collection of ancient items. If you are
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agree
and
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time
permits, we can
surely
plan to visit these places. I may not have sound understanding of places of your city
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so
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please
you
also
suggest
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some
places according to your knowledge and experience of the city.
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So
spare
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some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
and be ready for another trip. I hope to
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see
you
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soon
.

Your Friend,

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Pritesh
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
Language comes first. It’s not that language grows out of consciousness, if you haven’t got language, you can’t be conscious.
Alan Moore

IELTS academic Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - Provide a short update about your life since you saw him/her last - Explain why you will be traveling to his/her city- Say what you would like to do when you visit his/her city v. 9

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
196 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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