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You are writing to your friend who lives in another country. You are inviting him/her to stay with you. There is a public event occurring that you would like him/her to go to with you. In your letter say- Why and when do you invite him/her? - Describe the v.2

You are writing to your friend who lives in another country. You are inviting him/her to stay with you. There is a public event occurring that you would like him/her to go to with you. In your letter say- Why and when do you invite him/her? - Describe the v. 2
To Wahyu Hay Wahyu, I am Wiwi how are you, I hope you are fine. I wrote this letter special to invite you come in my country, this is the best chance for us to meet. While that, I want to tell you that there is a concert and the main star is your favorite celebrity as well as I know that you are really want to join the show of him. You should come here at 27 december this year, as of before the show, we can hang around together. The event at 30 december, which the location near my boarding house despite there are several performances during the concert that we will watch latter. Before the event I will show you the whole of my environment here then bring you in some places which have wonderful scenery such as beautiful beach, public walking and great garden. I promise that you will not boring as long as you are here with me. I wait your respond, and I hope you agree with this plan. Your close friend
To
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Wahyu


Hay
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Wahyu
, I am
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Wiwi
how are you, I hope you are fine. I wrote this letter special to invite you
The words "come in" and "come to" have different meanings. "Come in my office" means "have an orgasm in my office." "Come to" or "Come into" means "enter." Did you mean "come to" or "come into"?
come in
my country, this is the best chance for us to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
. While that, I want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
you that there is a concert and the main star is your favorite celebrity
as well
as I know that you are
really
Consider using a past participle here: "wanted".
want
to
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join
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
of him.

You should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
here at 27
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december
this year, as of
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before
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
, we can hang around together. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
at 30
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december
, which the location near my boarding
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
despite there are several performances during the concert that we will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
latter.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Before
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
you the whole of my environment here then bring you in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
places which have wonderful scenery such as
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
beach, public walking and great garden. I promise that you will not
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "bore"
boring
as long as you are here with me. I wait your
Did you mean "response"?
respond
, and I hope you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with this plan.

Your close friend
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes
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Frank Smith

IELTS academic You are writing to your friend who lives in another country. You are inviting him/her to stay with you. There is a public event occurring that you would like him/her to go to with you. In your letter say- Why and when do you invite him/her? - Describe the v. 2

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
177 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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