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Write a letter to a friend inviting him her to watch a movie that he she wanted to see Tell him her What movie is it Why do you think it might be interesting Make arrangements to watch it together v.2

Write a letter to a friend inviting him her to watch a movie that he she wanted to see Tell him her What movie is it Why do you think it might be interesting Make arrangements to watch it together v. 2
Dear John Collins, Hi there! I am fine and hope that this letter will find you in good health. Anyway, the purpose of this letter is to invite you to watch your favorite movie next part, ‘Transformer: The Age of Extinction’, next week with me. Please, allow me to elaborate more. Firstly, I think that this movie will be very interesting, because all the other parts of it had a huge hit in the theaters in the past. Moreover, it is a 3-dimensional picture, and has lots of computer graphics effects in the actions. Additionally, a person, whom I met accidentally on the morning walk yesterday, told me that the story of this movie is superb. Therefore, we should see this picture. Secondly, I have booked the tow tickets of the morning show of this movie in the Surya Cinema, which is 3 kilometers away from my residence. Furthermore, it is a beautiful theater and he has a high definition screen. For travelling to this picture hall, fortunately, my father’s motor bike is free that day. So, I have completed all the arrangements to see this film. Finally, I hope that you will accept my proposal, and we will meet soon. With lots of love, James Smith.
Dear John Collins,

Hi there! I am fine and hope that this letter will find you in
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good
health. Anyway, the purpose of this letter is to invite you to
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watch
your favorite
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movie
next
part, ‘Transformer: The Age of Extinction’,
next
week with me.
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Please
,
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allow
me to elaborate more.

Firstly
, I
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think
that this
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movie
will be
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very
interesting,
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because
all the other parts of it had a huge hit in the theaters in the past.
Moreover
, it is a 3-dimensional picture, and has lots of computer graphics effects in the actions.
Additionally
, a person, whom I met
accidentally
on the morning walk yesterday,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
me that the story of this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
is superb.
Therefore
, we should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
this picture.

Secondly
, I have booked the tow tickets of the morning
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
of this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
in the Surya Cinema, which is 3 kilometers away from my residence.
Furthermore
, it is a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
theater and
he has a high definition screen. For travelling to this picture hall,
fortunately
, my father’s motor bike is free that day.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, I have completed all the arrangements to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
this film.

Finally
, I hope that you will accept my proposal, and we will
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meet
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

With lots of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
,

James Smith.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS academic Write a letter to a friend inviting him her to watch a movie that he she wanted to see Tell him her What movie is it Why do you think it might be interesting Make arrangements to watch it together v. 2

Academic
  American English
7 paragraphs
207 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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