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You play sports (eg football) for a local team. you recently heard that a player of your team is in a hospital. Write a letter to your team-mate. In your letter you say how you feel about the news. Ask about the treatment in the hospital. Suggest some ways v.2

You play sports (eg football) for a local team. you recently heard that a player of your team is in a hospital. Write a letter to your team-mate. In your letter you say how you feel about the news. Ask about the treatment in the hospital. Suggest some ways v. 2
Dear Frank, I was very sorry to hear about your accident. I felt bad for not being with you in tough timings. I hope you doing better today and that it is not too boring in the hospital. The last week game was fascinating and it was a close match. We lost the game in the final over by just two runs and it went down to the wire in the final over’s. This probably, you were not there in the team. You used to score quick runs at the top of the order. It was disappointing for me, I could not score the runs in the middle order and I was shocked that our team could not cross the line. Nevertheless, it was a good match in the end and we had a nail baiting thriller. It is worth mentioning about the weather. It was very hot and humid. Pitch was dried up and seamers were getting the extra bounce. By end of the game whole team was down and everyone was exhausted. Let us know when you are going home and we will arrange someone to pick you up for the next game to watch. We love to have you in the field as soon as possible. Looking forward to hear from you. Best wishes Sudheerkumar
Dear Frank,

I was
very
sorry to hear about your accident. I felt
bad
for not being with you in tough timings.
I
hope
you doing
better
today
and that it is not too boring in the hospital.

The last week game was fascinating and it was a close match. We lost the game in the final over by
just
two runs and it went down to the wire in the final over’s. This
probably
, you were not there in the team. You
used
to score quick runs at the top of the order. It was disappointing for me, I could not score the runs in the middle
order and
I
was shocked
that our team could not cross the line.
Nevertheless
, it was a
good
match in the
end and
we had a nail baiting thriller.

It is worth
mentioning about the
weather. It was
very
hot and humid. Pitch
was dried
up and
seamers
were getting the extra bounce. By
end
of the game whole team was down and everyone
was exhausted
.

Let
us know when you are going
home and
we will arrange someone to pick you up for the
next
game to
watch
. We
love
to have you in the field as
soon
as possible.

Looking forward
to hear
from you.

Best wishes

Sudheerkumar
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS academic You play sports (eg football) for a local team. you recently heard that a player of your team is in a hospital. Write a letter to your team-mate. In your letter you say how you feel about the news. Ask about the treatment in the hospital. Suggest some ways v. 2

Academic
  American English
8 paragraphs
217 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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