Dear John,
I hope you are enjoying your days with your wife in Canada! I am writing to you to let you know that I have recently join a new organization in Australia since last month. You must be wondering why I left my high paid job in India even after posted in my hometown. Actually, the life in Australia far better than India, and I have realized after visiting this country last year during my official trip. Since then, it becomes my dream to get a job and settle down here.
I have joined an IT company - TCS, Australia as a software developer with handsome remuneration. Office ambience is so nice that I do not have words to explain compare to my office in India; colleagues are friendly and helpful, workload is moderate, and no more overtime.
One more good news for you; I am blessed with a baby girl last month as well. My wife and daughter are currently with my parents in India due to obvious reason. They will shift to Australia after 6 months, when my daughter will stabilized.
Hope to see you soon!
Best regards,
Bibhu Kalita
Dear John,
I hope you are enjoying your days with your wife in Canada! I am writing to you to
let
you know that I have recently
join
a new organization in Australia since last month. You
must
be wondering why I
left
my high paid job in India even after posted in my hometown. Actually, the life in Australia far better than India, and I have realized after visiting this country last year during my official trip. Since then, it becomes my dream to
get
a job and settle down here.
I have
joined
an IT
company
-
TCS, Australia as a software developer with handsome remuneration. Office ambience is
so
nice that I do not have words to
explain
compare to my office in India; colleagues are friendly and helpful, workload is moderate, and no more overtime.
One more
good
news for you; I
am blessed
with a baby girl last month
as well
. My wife and daughter are
currently
with my parents in India due to obvious reason. They will shift to Australia after 6 months, when my daughter will
stabilized
.
Hope to
see
you
soon
!
Best regards,
Bibhu
Kalita
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