Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You hadn't seen each other for a long time. say how you felt about the visitrefer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/herinvite your friend to visit youYou should writ v.5

You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You hadn't seen each other for a long time. say how you felt about the visitrefer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/herinvite your friend to visit youYou should writ v. 5
Dear George, I hope that you are doing great! It' s been a long time since we last met. I' m writing to thank you for the wonderful stay that you have offered while I was in Kodaikanal. Staying at your home was a truly memorable experience for me. Especially, the warm treatment by the aunt and uncle was extremely amazing. Not to mention the delicious recipes prepared by your mom, those were the most delightful dishes that I have ever had. I must certainly mention the adventurous hill ride we had in your jeep. The most interesting part of it was where you thought me how to drive a jeep, immediately, when I asked you for it. That was really scary, in particular, when I lost control on that steep mountain road. For a moment I thought we are done. Thankfully, you took control of the vehicle instantly. I am so sorry about that, but it was a lifetime memory though. Why don' t you come to Chennai this summer after completing your final exams? Here, I will be happy to offer you an excellent vacation. From here, we can visit interesting places around the city such as Kovalam water sports, amusement parks and also you can visit the Egmore museum for collecting details for your upcoming research. I am leaving for now. I and my parents will be glad to host you when you come here. Best wishes, Akil
Dear George,

I hope that you are doing great!
Possible spelling mistake found.
It&
#039; s been a long time since we last met.
Possible spelling mistake found.
I&
#039; m writing to thank you for the wonderful stay that you have offered while I was in
Possible spelling mistake found.
Kodaikanal
.

Staying at your home was a
truly
memorable experience for me.
Especially
, the warm treatment by the aunt and uncle was
extremely
amazing. Not to mention the delicious recipes prepared by your mom, those were the most delightful dishes that I have ever had.

I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
certainly
mention the adventurous hill ride we had in your jeep. The most interesting part of it was where you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
me how to drive a jeep, immediately, when I asked you for it. That was
The extreme adjective for scary is "terrifying".
really scary
,
in particular
, when I lost control on that steep mountain road. For a moment I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
we
are done
.
Thankfully
, you took control of the vehicle
instantly
. I am
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
sorry about that,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it was a lifetime memory though.

Why
Possible spelling mistake found.
don&
#039; t you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to Chennai this summer after completing your final exams? Here, I will be happy to offer you an excellent vacation. From here, we can visit interesting places around the city such as
Possible spelling mistake found.
Kovalam
water sports, amusement parks and
also
you can visit the
Possible spelling mistake found.
Egmore
museum for collecting
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
for your upcoming research.

I am leaving for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
. I and my parents will be glad to host you when you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
here.

Best wishes,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Akil
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS academic You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You hadn't seen each other for a long time. say how you felt about the visitrefer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/herinvite your friend to visit youYou should writ v. 5

Academic
  American English
8 paragraphs
240 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts


Recent posts