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The table displays the average monthly rainfall for the year in five cities of the world. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.2

The table displays the average monthly rainfall for the year in five cities of the world.
The table compares the mean precipitation of a month in Hong Kong, Tokyo, Jakarta, Cairo, and London for a year. Overall, Hong Kong has the maximum rainfall where Cairo has the least. Most of the cities have the highest rainfall in the middle of the year. According to the table, for the first six months, rainfall is in increasing order for Hong Kong, Tokyo, and Jakarta but Cairo and London have reverse order. The Jakarta has 300mm of rainfall in January which is followed by London with 80mm, Tokyo with 48mm, Hong Kong contains 24mm and the least precipitation in Cairo of 7mm. For the next following months, the rainfall in Hong Kong and Tokyo rises gradually but the other three cities have a decline. Again for the second half, In August the rainfall grow up by 354mm than January in Hong Kong, which is the highest throughout the period, and slumping down for rest months in Hong Kong and Tokyo. In contrast, in Jakarta and London rain amount is constantly growing till the end of the year but Cairo has no rainfall from September to December. By the end, Jakarta has the highest rainfall of 210mm where other cities have under 80mm.
The table compares the mean precipitation of a
month
in Hong Kong, Tokyo, Jakarta, Cairo, and London for a year.

Overall
, Hong Kong has the maximum
rainfall
where Cairo has the least. Most of the cities have the highest
rainfall
in the middle of the year.

According to the table, for the
first
six
months
,
rainfall
is in increasing order for Hong Kong, Tokyo, and Jakarta
but
Cairo and London have reverse order. The Jakarta has
300mm
of
rainfall
in January which
is followed
by London with
80mm
, Tokyo with
48mm
, Hong Kong contains
24mm
and the least precipitation in Cairo of
7mm
. For the
next
following
months
, the
rainfall
in Hong Kong and Tokyo rises
gradually
but
the other three cities have a decline.

Again for the second half, In August the
rainfall
grow up by
354mm
than January in Hong Kong, which is the highest throughout the period, and slumping down for rest
months
in Hong Kong and Tokyo.
In contrast
, in Jakarta and London rain amount is
constantly
growing till the
end
of the year
but
Cairo has no
rainfall
from September to December. By the
end
, Jakarta has the highest
rainfall
of
210mm
where other cities have under
80mm
.
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12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
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IELTS academic The table displays the average monthly rainfall for the year in five cities of the world.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
203 words
6.0
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