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You have invited some friends to come on holiday You are going to the airport to meet them They have asked you how to get to your house from the airport Write a letter to your friends In your letter Explain that you will meet them at the airport Give them v.1

You have invited some friends to come on holiday You are going to the airport to meet them They have asked you how to get to your house from the airport Write a letter to your friends In your letter Explain that you will meet them at the airport Give them v. 1
Dear Ananya & Urmi, I hope you are in pink of health. I was thrilled to know that you have finally accepted my invitation to visit India during Christmas vacation. Anyway, the reason I am writing to you is to tell you that I will be coming to airport to pick you; I have already planned your stay with me at my home. And I would like to give you some useful tips which will be helpful on your trip. Firstly bring some warm cloths as winter season is very cold in some parts of India. Secondly, beware of strangers especially on the airport. I am highly excited to see you and hence I have already made arrangements for your trip. I am delighted to tell you that we are going to Kashmir. Our itinerary covers the places like Srinagar, Gulmurg, Sonmarg, Pehalgam, Patnitop, with activities like, Shikara ride in Dal lake, Gandola ride, paragliding xx while water rafting. We are also going to see apple gardens and saffron plantations. I look forward to meeting you. Give my regards to your family. Warm wishes, Parag.
Dear
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Ananya
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;
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Urmi
,

I hope you are in pink of health. I
was thrilled
to know that you have
finally
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accepted
my invitation to visit India during Christmas vacation.

Anyway, the reason I am writing to you is to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
you that I will be coming to airport to pick you; I have already planned your stay with me at my home. And I would like to give you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
useful tips which will be helpful on your trip.
Firstly
bring
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
warm cloths as winter season is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cold
in
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some
parts of India.
Secondly
, beware of strangers
especially
on the airport.

I am
highly
excited to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you and
hence
I have already made arrangements for your trip. I
am delighted
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
you that we are going to Kashmir. Our itinerary covers the places like Srinagar,
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Gulmurg
,
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Sonmarg
,
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Pehalgam
,
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Patnitop
, with activities like,
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Shikara
ride in
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Dal
lake,
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Gandola
ride, paragliding xx while water rafting. We are
also
going to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
apple gardens and saffron plantations.

I look forward to meeting you. Give my regards to your family.

Warm wishes,

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Parag
.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Mistakes
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IELTS academic You have invited some friends to come on holiday You are going to the airport to meet them They have asked you how to get to your house from the airport Write a letter to your friends In your letter Explain that you will meet them at the airport Give them v. 1

Academic
  American English
7 paragraphs
185 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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