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Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends They have just sent you some photos of your holiday Write a letter to your friends In your letter thank them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you didn t write earlier i v.2

Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends They have just sent you some photos of your holiday Write a letter to your friends In your letter thank them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you didn t write earlier i v. 2
Dear John, Hope you are doing well. How stunning photos that you took it! You are absolutely fantastic photographer, so please never say you do not know how to use camera anymore. It reminds me the great time you and I in your country, not only the speechless views and amazing foods, but also the joyful travel experiences under your arrangements, I love your country more that anything else. Do you remember I extended my holidays for 5 days? So I am extremely busy after I back to work, please forgive me write down thank letter to you so late. I would like to invite you to come to my country and treat you as if you did it for me. I recalled that you told me you still have 2 weeks annual leaves? Please use that travel to my country, I will prepare everything you need, we will have great time definitely! Cannot wait to see you. Kind regards, Joe
Dear John,

Hope you are doing well.

How stunning photos that you took it! You are
absolutely
fantastic photographer,
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so
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please
never say you do not know how to
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use
camera anymore. It reminds me the great time you and I in your
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country
, not
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only
the speechless views and amazing foods,
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but
also
the joyful travel experiences under your arrangements, I
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love
your
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country
more that anything else.

Do you remember I extended my holidays for 5 days?
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So
I am
extremely
busy after I back to work,
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please
forgive me write down thank letter to you
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so
late.

I would like to invite you to
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come
to my
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country
and treat you as if you did it for me. I recalled that you
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told
me you
still
have 2 weeks annual
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leaves
?
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Please
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use
that travel to my
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country
, I will prepare everything you need, we will have great time definitely! Cannot wait to
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see
you.

Kind regards,

Joe
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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IELTS academic Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends They have just sent you some photos of your holiday Write a letter to your friends In your letter thank them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you didn t write earlier i v. 2

Academic
  American English
7 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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