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You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference Write a letter to a former teacher In your letter give details of the job explain why it is important to you suggest that information your teacher could put in the reference v.2

You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference Write a letter to a former teacher In your letter give details of the job explain why it is important to you suggest that information your teacher could put in the reference v. 2
Dear Alister, I am writing this to request you to provide the letter of reference for my job application that I intend to submit next week. A week ago, I had seen an advertisement for the position ‘Research Assistant’ at the School of Engineering, Electronics in the University of Oxford’s job portal. The requirements for this job advert exactly match with my skills that I earned under your guidance at the University of Edinburgh, Scotland. In particular, I believe that the research project thesis which I had done during my Master’s degree under your supervision would be very beneficial to pursue this job effectively. Besides, this position will enhance and shape my career in the right path in the long run in the field of Electronics. Hence, I kindly request you to provide an efficient reference letter that will make my job application stand apart from other candidates. Owing to this, I would request you to mention my achievements, grades, and skill sets in your reference, as this will be the value added details and play a pivotal role while short listing the candidates for this position. Yours sincerely, Krrish
Dear
Alister
,

I am writing this to request you to provide the letter of reference for my
job
application that I intend to submit
next
week.

A week ago, I had
seen
an advertisement for the position ‘Research Assistant’ at the School of Engineering, Electronics in the University of Oxford’s
job
portal. The requirements for this
job
advert exactly match with my
skills
that I earned under your guidance at the University of Edinburgh, Scotland.
In particular
, I believe that the research project thesis which I had done during my Master’s degree under your supervision would be
very
beneficial to pursue this
job
effectively
.
Besides
, this position will enhance and shape my career in the right path in the long run in the field of Electronics.

Hence
, I kindly request you to provide an efficient reference letter that will
make
my
job
application stand apart from other candidates. Owing to this, I would request you to mention my achievements, grades, and
skill
sets in your reference, as this will be the value
added
details
and play a pivotal role while short listing the candidates for this position.

Yours
sincerely
,

Krrish
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS academic You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference Write a letter to a former teacher In your letter give details of the job explain why it is important to you suggest that information your teacher could put in the reference v. 2

Academic
  American English
6 paragraphs
189 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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