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The bar chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013 v.2

The bar chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013 v. 2
The bar chart illustrates how often the US citizens went to fast food restaurants in the years 2003, 2006 and 2013. Overall, it is clear that the percentages of the population who ate at fast food restaurants every day and those who never ate were lowest. Most of the American people spent time eating at fast food restaurants between once or several times every month and once a week. From 3003 to 2006, a decrease of approximately 2% was seen in both the proportions of people never eating fast food and those who ate on a daily basis. By 2013, there has been no change in these segments. By contrast, the major differences can be found in the groups of who ate at fast food restaurants on a weekly basis (once or several times a week) and in the groups in which people visited these places from once to a few times per month. While in 2006, more than one-third of the US population had meals at fast food restaurants once a week, in 2013 most of them did so only once or twice every month. Interestingly, the figure for those eating several times every year remained stable from 2006 to 2013.
The bar chart illustrates how
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often
the US citizens went to
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food
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restaurants
in the years 2003, 2006 and 2013.

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, it is
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clear
that the percentages of the population
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who
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ate
at
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fast
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food
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restaurants
every day and those
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who
never
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ate
were lowest. Most of the American
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people
spent
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time
eating at
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fast
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food
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restaurants
between
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once
or several
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times
every month and
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once
a week.

From 3003 to 2006, a decrease of approximately 2% was
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seen
in both the proportions of
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people
never eating
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fast
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food
and those
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who
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ate
on a daily basis. By 2013, there has been no
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change
in these segments.

By contrast, the major differences can
be found
in the groups of
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who
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ate
at
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fast
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food
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restaurants
on a weekly basis
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(once
or several
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times
a week) and in the groups in which
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people
visited these places from
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once
to a few
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times
per month. While in 2006, more than one-third of the US population had meals at
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fast
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food
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restaurants
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once
a week, in 2013 most of them did
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so
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only
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once
or twice every month.
Interestingly
, the figure for those eating several
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times
every year remained stable from 2006 to 2013.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
36Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS academic The bar chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013 v. 2

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
202 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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