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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letterexplain the reasons for the noiseapologisedescribe what action you will takeYou should write at least 150 words v.4

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letterexplain the reasons for the noiseapologisedescribe what action you will takev. 4
Dear Mr. and Mrs. John, I hope you are keeping well? . I am writing to acknowledge the receipt of your letter regarding the disturbance from my flat for the past three days. As you well know, the bathroom is on the first floor in the apartment and recently, I noticed a leak in my sitting room ceiling. The plumber has checked and found out that the bathroom pipe was broken and needed to be fixed urgently to avoid subsequent damage to the ceiling. Hence, the loud sounds coming from my apartment. The repairs were estimated to take at most three days but unfortunately, it is lingering longer than expected. I humbly wish to apologize for all the inconvenience the noise has caused you. I am also sorry for not contacting you before the commencement of the repairs to intimate you on what you might experience as a result. I have advised the plumber to work only in the mornings between the hours of 8 am-12pm when you will be at the office so as not to cause a nuisance when you are resting with your family. I am deeply sorry for all the bother caused.
Dear Mr. and Mrs. John,

I hope you are keeping well?
.


I am writing to acknowledge the receipt of your letter regarding the disturbance from my flat for the past three days.

As you well know, the bathroom is on the
first
floor in the apartment and recently, I noticed a leak in my sitting room ceiling. The plumber has
checked
and found out that the bathroom pipe
was broken
and needed to be
fixed
urgently
to avoid subsequent damage to the ceiling.
Hence
, the loud sounds coming from my apartment. The repairs
were estimated
to take at most three days
but
unfortunately, it is lingering longer than
expected
.

I
humbly
wish to apologize for all the inconvenience the noise has caused you. I am
also
sorry for not contacting you
before
the commencement of the repairs to intimate you on what you might experience
as a result
.

I
have advised the plumber to work
only
in the mornings between the hours of 8 am-12pm when you will be at the office
so
as not to cause a nuisance when you are resting with your family.

I
am
deeply
sorry for all the bother caused.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS academic Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letterexplain the reasons for the noiseapologisedescribe what action you will takev. 4

Academic
  American English
7 paragraphs
196 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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