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The charts A and B show the share of the UK and Australian cinema market in 2001 and cinema admission in the UK and Australia from 1976 to 2006 Write a report for a university lecture describing the information shown below v.2

The charts A and B show the share of the UK and Australian cinema market in 2001 and cinema admission in the UK and Australia from 1976 to 2006 Write a report for a university lecture describing the information shown below v. 2
There are two graphs, the upper bar graph shows the the the Country origin of the films and groups them into Australian, UK US and Other that has been shown in theaters UK and Australia in year 2001 and the bottom line graph compares the cinema audiences in millions between 1975 to 2005 in Uk and Australia. Overall in year 2001 US films outnumbers the total of other countries in both Australia and UK, and from 1985 and on there is a increasing trend of audiences in both UK and Australia. Graph a depicts that in year 2001 in Australia 65 per cent of films are made in US which followed by others category with 18 per cent. Both UK and Australian films comprises less than 10 per cent, in contrast, In UK vast majority of films are produced in US reaching 75 percent. Uk films are presenting the second group with reaching 20 percent. When we look at second graph which provides us information about the number of audiences, cinema viewers in UK started from 100 millions and reached 120 millions in year 1977 and went down to 60 million in1985 where it makes its nadir. In contrast to this in Australia, although the number of audiences were far less than UK, it followed a quite steady state till 1985 between 20 to 40 million. From 1985 and on there is an increasing trend of audiences in both countries where it ended with 160 millions in UK and 80 million in Australia. To sum up there is a major dominancy of US films in both countries and although the audiences in UK surpasses Australia there is an increasing trend of cinema admissions in both countries for the last 20 years.
There are two
graphs
, the upper bar
graph
shows
the
the the
Country
origin of the films and groups them into Australian, UK US and Other that has
been shown
in theaters UK and Australia in
year
2001 and the bottom line
graph
compares the cinema
audiences
in
millions
between 1975 to 2005
in
Uk
and Australia.
Overall
in
year
2001 US films outnumbers the total of other
countries
in both Australia and UK, and from 1985 and on there is
a
increasing trend of
audiences
in both UK and Australia.

Graph a depicts that in
year
2001 in Australia 65 per cent of films
are
made in US which followed by
others
category with 18 per cent. Both UK and Australian films comprises less than 10 per cent,
in contrast
, In UK vast majority of films
are produced
in US reaching 75 percent.
Uk
films are presenting the second group with reaching 20 percent.

When we look at second
graph
which provides us information about the number of
audiences
, cinema viewers in UK
started
from 100
millions
and reached 120
millions
in
year
1977 and went down to 60
million
in1985 where it
makes
its nadir.
In contrast
to this in Australia, although the number of
audiences
were far less than UK, it followed a quite steady state till 1985
between 20 to 40
million
. From 1985 and on there is an increasing trend of
audiences
in both
countries
where it ended with 160
millions
in UK and 80
million
in Australia.

To sum up there is a major
dominancy
of US films in both
countries
and although the
audiences
in UK surpasses Australia there is an increasing trend of cinema admissions in both
countries
for the last 20 years.
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26Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS academic The charts A and B show the share of the UK and Australian cinema market in 2001 and cinema admission in the UK and Australia from 1976 to 2006 Write a report for a university lecture describing the information shown below v. 2

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